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The Human Concept of Time and Love
Numb bodied aching in the dark
Staring blindly into nothing
Bedridden with heavy emotions
These gloomy summer days remind me of past times
Reminiscing of our wintertime lust
To be one is emanating
Your intelligence radiated these empty halls
Your fragrance still trapped on the tight corners of my bed
What I would do to feel your emotional depth once more
But the past and the present are unchangeable
The universe antagonizes me with its cruel concept of time
To accept this new physical reality is suicide to my psyche
What I would do to have our individual energies correspond once more
But in the end, I stand delusional and alone suffering in memory
Memories that once intertwined in both our minds simultaneously
When our wintertime lust turned into summertime love
The universe antagonizes me with its cruel concept of time
Reminding me nothing is real
Reminding me everything has an expiration date and must die
Some call it fate, but I recognize it as the universe antagonizing me
Reminding me the human concept of love is unreal
This human concept of love is so surreal
Staring blindly into nothing
Bedridden with heavy emotions
These gloomy summer days remind me of past times
Reminiscing of our wintertime lust
To be one is emanating
Your intelligence radiated these empty halls
Your fragrance still trapped on the tight corners of my bed
What I would do to feel your emotional depth once more
But the past and the present are unchangeable
The universe antagonizes me with its cruel concept of time
To accept this new physical reality is suicide to my psyche
What I would do to have our individual energies correspond once more
But in the end, I stand delusional and alone suffering in memory
Memories that once intertwined in both our minds simultaneously
When our wintertime lust turned into summertime love
The universe antagonizes me with its cruel concept of time
Reminding me nothing is real
Reminding me everything has an expiration date and must die
Some call it fate, but I recognize it as the universe antagonizing me
Reminding me the human concept of love is unreal
This human concept of love is so surreal
Published 7th Sep 2022
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7th Sep 2022 4:08pm
Brownwidow,
This piece u ah typed truly had deep emotional look forward to the next poetic line. The luva's thoughts of their luva are so heartfelt as well. The human concept of love is so unreal. The human concept of love is so surreal. Those lines of thy poem truly made me want to read this again. This is why I made this a reading list ah favorite. When our winter time lust turned into summer time love. This line tells me of this heated intensity of from beginning enclosure of relationship hangout to something that enraptured u too within to not want to leave each other. Only death could have separated the two of them, because, their luv for each other was that stoutly but not hateable upon. Glamorous ah write! 👁️👍🌷🍑👅🌈💋🍑🍜🍹🥂🍹🥂🍹🥂
This piece u ah typed truly had deep emotional look forward to the next poetic line. The luva's thoughts of their luva are so heartfelt as well. The human concept of love is so unreal. The human concept of love is so surreal. Those lines of thy poem truly made me want to read this again. This is why I made this a reading list ah favorite. When our winter time lust turned into summer time love. This line tells me of this heated intensity of from beginning enclosure of relationship hangout to something that enraptured u too within to not want to leave each other. Only death could have separated the two of them, because, their luv for each other was that stoutly but not hateable upon. Glamorous ah write! 👁️👍🌷🍑👅🌈💋🍑🍜🍹🥂🍹🥂🍹🥂
8th Sep 2022 4:03am
I think it is great work and I also write about love in real and surrealistic fashion.
You have great talent.
You have great talent.
9th Sep 2022 2:25am
"To accept this new physical reality is suicide to my psyche"
This metaphor with vivid imagery clearly shows one's state of mind and the depth of the hurt
There are those who believe, in their wisdom, that the darkness exists because of its fear of the light
Whenever the light comes it chases it away
Quotation:
“Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. It is our light, not our darkness that most frightens us. We ask ourselves, 'Who am I to be brilliant, gorgeous, talented, fabulous?' Actually, who are you not to be? You are a child of God. Your playing small does not serve the world. There is nothing enlightened about shrinking so that other people won't feel insecure around you. We are all meant to shine, as children do. We were born to make manifest the glory of God that is within us. It's not just in some of us; it's in everyone. And as we let our own light shine, we unconsciously give other people permission to do the same. As we are liberated from our own fear, our presence automatically liberates others.”
― Marianne Williamson, A Return to Love: Reflections on the Principles of "A Course in Miracles"
This metaphor with vivid imagery clearly shows one's state of mind and the depth of the hurt
There are those who believe, in their wisdom, that the darkness exists because of its fear of the light
Whenever the light comes it chases it away
Quotation:
“Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. It is our light, not our darkness that most frightens us. We ask ourselves, 'Who am I to be brilliant, gorgeous, talented, fabulous?' Actually, who are you not to be? You are a child of God. Your playing small does not serve the world. There is nothing enlightened about shrinking so that other people won't feel insecure around you. We are all meant to shine, as children do. We were born to make manifest the glory of God that is within us. It's not just in some of us; it's in everyone. And as we let our own light shine, we unconsciously give other people permission to do the same. As we are liberated from our own fear, our presence automatically liberates others.”
― Marianne Williamson, A Return to Love: Reflections on the Principles of "A Course in Miracles"
14th Sep 2022 9:15am
The longing for what has been brings to mind John Lennon's words in "Across The Universe".
