Making it Beautiful

It's really cool and spur of the moment pieces at times make the best writing. Tight work Lady

Awh - hey Meme:)

Thanks for reading.
I've been writing and PMing at the same time. LOL
I'm learning how to multi task. LOL

Thanks for the comment amgio:)

hello beautiful Adelphina this so beautiful to me
is it okay if I pretend it's for me?

Absolutely lovely:) hahaha
So happy you enjoyed!!
Anything to make you smile:)

Thanks for the RL and commenting

Dear A,

I really enjoyed the almost eerie mystical quality in addition to the love. Made me think of a lost love playing in wait for their return.
So cool how you took the inspiration from the song. Someday I’m going to try that…
Lovely write. H🌷

Hi H!!

Yes, that was exactly what I was going for. Having someone
dear to your heart - and playing for him with your whole being.
When he's gone - living in the music for the connection. Who
cares if it's not healthy. Totally irrelevant:)

thanks for the RL and stopping by amiga.

And yes - you should totally try - you got nothing to lose:)

Beautiful...

:)

Aw - shucks:)

Thanks Cipher:)

I love how you repeated “Just for you.” Makes the reader feel that it is indeed, just for them. I agree with Honoria in that this has an eerie, mystical quality.
I really love this.

So happy you enjoyed. Love combining the essence of beauty
into something a little dark. But not too dark. Just enough to
be enchanting in a way. No one is perfect. I don't believe beauty is either.
Hope that make sense:)

Thanks for stopping by and the RL

Have a wonderful Sunday!!

Sorry, but I'm dealing with the fingers visual a bit too much for a minute....
-How is this write not complicated?  The sexiness of it complicates things!   It's all about the visual build to me.  The intricacies of the moving fingers.  
Sorry, but this is sexy.  Lol
The bleeding fingers could be the movement of the fingers being enhanced by the nail polish catching light .
Hey I see what I see!  

Music and you are a hell of a duo.

Hi Styxian - hahahaha

I'm  stoked you thought it is sexy. LOL
When I put "just for you" I wanted to bring in the reader.
To captivate and let you build your own visuals - cause it really is just for you. LOL  

Not going to lie though - your comment made my heart flutter with happiness. If I could give you a high five you right now - I would. LOL

Loved your take on the bloody fingers and nail polish.
Totally awesome!!!!

Music's never let me down. Always been there for me through
thick and thin:)

Thanks for the RL and commenting Mr. Sexy:)

Wonderfully creepy
This band is coming to visit Poetspeak and who knows what influences they will have

BIG BLOODY LIKE

❤💯

Hi PS

That is music to my ears. LOL
Can't wait to see what you cook up buddy!!!

Love the wonderfully creepy comment.
That is perfect!!!

Thanks for the RL and stopping by!!

It’s awesome how the music 🎼 inspires you! Visually, a perfect flow!

Hi NG:)

I quit questioning the how and why a long time ago. LOL
For some reason music brings me images to absorb.
Putting them down on paper is challenging and fun at times.
Other times - it can be a pain in the booty!! LOL

thanks for commenting amiga.
Hope you are having a marvelous day!!

Simple… honest… authentic…

Hi LilD:)

Thank you!!
Not everything needs to be complicated.
To me some of the best reading is easy in words
and delivery:)  
Totally got what I was trying to convey.

Hope you are having a blast in your travels amiga!!

Thanks for the RL and stopping by:)

Oh, this is so hauntingly beautiful. I felt like she is a ghost in this house that they lived in. Making it beautiful, like her, for eternity just waiting for him to die and join her. Forever wearing this red dress waiting. The echo of her voice and notes heard throughout the house and she always appears at midnight. Blowing these creepy kisses so people can feel her presence. Playing this piano till her ghostly nails bleed. Sitting all alone, an echo scaring people away waiting for him. ;) Absolutely love it. You made it so beautiful. I love haunted places so I would definitely want to hang out with her for a while. Maybe go and get him and bring him back damnit. :p

Hey Kristina:)

What you just described is awesome!! LOL
To me the tone of the piano was dark and also beautiful in a way.
It does feel haunted when reading too. I also see the wind billowing
around her red dress making is seem like a red cloud she's floating on while playing. hahaha
Too cool:)!!!!

Thanks for stopping by and giving me your take on this.
You're thoughts added something extra special:)

And the RL:))))

A nice flow here. Words treated with reverence that speak to your reader on a personal level. A++

Hi PW

Thank you. Was trying to keep it simple with three lines and
relatable words. LOL
So happy you enjoyed:)
Is that a double A!!  
Woop Woop!!!  

Beautifully captured... Most often I write listening to piano music...now I have a visual to go along with my inspiration :)

Hey Tim:)

Dude !! That is awesome. Had no idea.
Just learned something about ya.
That is pretty cool!

So happy I could give you a visual:)

Thanks for stopping by and commenting.

No F flat here! Feels like a very personal, almost intimate write.

Hi Billy:)

Yes - I was trying to bring in the reader and make it personal.
So glad it worked. Trying to write something with 3 lines
with words people can easily grasp.

I have no idea how to play
piano but in my mind I was killing it. LOL

Thanks for stopping by Snaggy!!

Remember, try 'D' de de de de, The Rutles. ;-)

Yes sir Maestro!! hehehehe

Cute

God bless you

Why thank you:)

The image of bloody piano keys is intense, haunting, yet beautiful.

LJ

Hi LJ.

I always like to build when I write.
Leave the intense stuff for the ending.
Trying different images to keep the reader interested.

Thanks for commenting:)

So, here I am practicing piano... and I get distracted by poetry (frequent occurrence) and I read THIS, and wow I love it!! Better yet, I checked out the song, and now I want to play it and SCREAM it! 😁
Anyway - awesome, eerie poem, matches the freaky vibe of the video perfectly.
❤️k

Hahahah!!!
Greatest comment ever!! LOL
Thank you so much. I'm kinda speechless - doesn't happen often
but I'm rolling with it:) So glad you enjoyed this.
You're going to kill it!!! Go for it!!

Thanks for the RL and amazing comment BK:)

you say uncomplicated, i say very well done

Hey You:)

I just left you a comment.!!

Thank you!!! Truly:)
Sometimes I get metaphored out. LOL
Wanted to keep it simple.
Thank you so so much.