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Feel like Shalott ( re-write of the poem 'shalott')

Concealed from the world
just like that shalott girl
can't remember how to talk
can't remember the last time i walked , away
why does it have to be this way?

my life is a twisted fairy-tale
my mind is feeling so frail
i've never seen the stars at night
i don't know i beautiful sight
feeling like shalott
i'm the girl that time forgot
i'm under a curse
things can't get much worse

i can't take much more of this place
it's freedom i can taste
even if i meet my death
with each breath ; i'm free
finally

i can't help being dramatic
if you want a story that's estatic
climb inside my head
if you wan to touch death
i'm frozen inside
but i still hold my pride
please take me with the tide
like the lady of shalott
my time has come and not forgot.
Written by 666gothchick (Paulina Dionne)
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