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MY GIFT
MY GIFT
“Closer..."
I breathed.
Against your breath,
maddingly you licked my lips.
Tugging...
You drank
my sighs.
In your heart
as you took
my lustful sips.
I GAVE and GAVE.
Stoking your thirst...
Lost but found into your drift.
And when you felt
my surrender
in your arms
you knew then
what was and had been given...
"My Gift."
“Closer..."
I breathed.
Against your breath,
maddingly you licked my lips.
Tugging...
You drank
my sighs.
In your heart
as you took
my lustful sips.
I GAVE and GAVE.
Stoking your thirst...
Lost but found into your drift.
And when you felt
my surrender
in your arms
you knew then
what was and had been given...
"My Gift."
Published 2nd Sep 2022
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The giving of "MYGIFT."
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2nd Sep 2022 6:16am
Hey Monovox128,
Thy gift that u ah gave. He or she worked for like a slave. This write shows u are an ah fine beyond great great auntee's extended days. This gift in which u release to this person of u ah speak. I know they would vouche for these words. This writing could never be seen as weak. The way u penned this piece with the wave of hey. The letters to look forward too in an each line is there starting at the begining hey. These lines are really magical. These lines are encouraging u see. These lines are the focus, that, keeps who she's talking too with her this the ah onely. 👄🌈👁️🤎🤍🎶🛳️🥦🥬🌽🌷🍑👅🌷💋🍑🌷🍑💋👅👄🌈👁️🍺🍻🥂🍹
Thy gift that u ah gave. He or she worked for like a slave. This write shows u are an ah fine beyond great great auntee's extended days. This gift in which u release to this person of u ah speak. I know they would vouche for these words. This writing could never be seen as weak. The way u penned this piece with the wave of hey. The letters to look forward too in an each line is there starting at the begining hey. These lines are really magical. These lines are encouraging u see. These lines are the focus, that, keeps who she's talking too with her this the ah onely. 👄🌈👁️🤎🤍🎶🛳️🥦🥬🌽🌷🍑👅🌷💋🍑🌷🍑💋👅👄🌈👁️🍺🍻🥂🍹
