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Lips To Kiss
You feel my words
they cry on paper ,
talking of my world
they speak your flavour ,
you know my worth
there's no regalia ,
you're off this earth
I wouldn't fail you .
Experiences and
messed up chances
sometimes
this is
the tune
of new dances .
Sometimes I wonder , I don't know
am I a big blunder , a comedy show ,
I always miss the thunder
and my cheeks , they glow
but with you in my bubble
my boat could really row .
Sexy eyes
and lips to kiss
you dot my I's
miki the miss .
they cry on paper ,
talking of my world
they speak your flavour ,
you know my worth
there's no regalia ,
you're off this earth
I wouldn't fail you .
Experiences and
messed up chances
sometimes
this is
the tune
of new dances .
Sometimes I wonder , I don't know
am I a big blunder , a comedy show ,
I always miss the thunder
and my cheeks , they glow
but with you in my bubble
my boat could really row .
Sexy eyes
and lips to kiss
you dot my I's
miki the miss .
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Oh My!
Anonymous
26th Mar 2012 3:01am
All I can say Paul is I love learning new dances. And dotting i's and crossing T's -well, I hate editing-ha ha..This is a beautiful write, truly seems heartfelt. I hope she knows how lucky she is. <3
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26th Mar 2012 3:40am
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Anonymous
26th Mar 2012 3:52am
How was I to guess that? I do see you said Miki but I thought in reference to editing-LOl-my aspie is showing-I don't really get any thing some times! Ha Ha (Do I get it now?)
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26th Mar 2012 3:58am
ha I told you on fb just before that and even sent it you on there lol so you must know
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Anonymous
26th Mar 2012 4:04am
I get it...xx
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O yes!
26th Mar 2012 3:07am
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26th Mar 2012 3:41am
Wow
Anonymous
26th Mar 2012 4:07am
Okay, so now I feel I should at least comment from the right perspective-but alas! I am lost for words-they have all tried to silence me for years-ha ha! I guess as I tame lions-you will take up Archery. I am humbled, truly-.
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re: Wow
26th Mar 2012 5:42pm
well , there are a few silencing techniques available , lololol but I'll not go there lmao
Lovely write...
26th Mar 2012 4:46am
Since I have arrived on DU I have been a fan of your work..
once again a lovely write
this young lady should be Oh So flattered!
once again a lovely write
this young lady should be Oh So flattered!
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re: Lovely write...
26th Mar 2012 5:40pm
haha
Anonymous
26th Mar 2012 4:35pm
Great write!
Fuck it, i'm throwing one in for good measure.
*Kiss*
Fuck it, i'm throwing one in for good measure.
*Kiss*
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re: haha
26th Mar 2012 5:43pm
Kiss me-and No-SHE was the fool, silly man!!
Anonymous
26th Mar 2012 6:09pm
see above...
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re: Kiss me-and No-SHE was the fool, silly man!!
26th Mar 2012 6:40pm
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Anonymous
26th Mar 2012 7:38pm
Paul u seem tongue twisted and giggly-are you alright?
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26th Mar 2012 8:59pm