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Rainbow
Your love the hues of a rainbow
Each path separate but combined
Showing me the way to your heart
Let's embrace, arms entwined
Chasing our dreams together
Rainy days left behind
Let's make new memories
I'm not colorblind
Each path separate but combined
Showing me the way to your heart
Let's embrace, arms entwined
Chasing our dreams together
Rainy days left behind
Let's make new memories
I'm not colorblind
Published 25th Aug 2022
Author's Note
Wanted to write about love and rainbows.
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25th Aug 2022 12:04pm
26th Aug 2022 11:54am
Thank you so much for your lovely comment. I was in a cheerful mood yesterday morning. Glad you enjoyed.
25th Aug 2022 12:05pm
26th Aug 2022 11:55am
25th Aug 2022 12:58pm
What an upbeat way to start my morning.
Thank you so much for that gift :)
Keith
Thank you so much for that gift :)
Keith
26th Aug 2022 11:56am
25th Aug 2022 3:18pm
26th Aug 2022 11:58am
Good morning, Lady Blue. A little cheer goes a long way. I'm delighted that you enjoyed. Have a wonderful day!
26th Aug 2022 00:14am
26th Aug 2022 11:59am
LOVE the big likes, that's when I know I've done good! Have a fantastic day, Gary!!
26th Aug 2022 3:14am
Love everything about this!!!
Rainbows are just big colorful smiles:)
Ending was awesome!!
Rainbows are just big colorful smiles:)
Ending was awesome!!
26th Aug 2022 12:01pm
I love that! I will remember that when I see my next rainbow.
Thank you, as always for stopping by and commenting :)
Thank you, as always for stopping by and commenting :)
26th Aug 2022 11:34am
I like the line 'Each path separate but combined'. I wrote something similar back in 2015, only mine's called 'Chasing Rainbows'. I may PM it to you one day if you'd like that. I believe you have succeeded in comparing love with rainbows. 😊
26th Aug 2022 11:36am
