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Dark Circles Around the Eyes
Living in a loophole,
or better
yet -
through a loophole.
Your guess
is
as good
as
mine.
I have been
cleansed
by
the
stasis.
The madness.
I have convinced myself that I am good.
Published 24th Aug 2022
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24th Aug 2022 11:30pm
I love this! So much to chew on, and so many layers of meaning with the circles, loops upon loops.
24th Aug 2022 11:34pm
25th Aug 2022 2:07am
Totally agree!!
Going through the loophole and getting out cleansed.
We have so many choices when looking upon ourselves in a loop.
The constant repeat of insanity in a way when watching ourselves over
and over again hoping for something to be different.
We finally realize it's up to you - to be in that state of mind -
to say your are good is one thing - but to believe it - that's the sweet spot:)
This really made me think - so thank you:)
Going through the loophole and getting out cleansed.
We have so many choices when looking upon ourselves in a loop.
The constant repeat of insanity in a way when watching ourselves over
and over again hoping for something to be different.
We finally realize it's up to you - to be in that state of mind -
to say your are good is one thing - but to believe it - that's the sweet spot:)
This really made me think - so thank you:)
25th Aug 2022 2:30pm
25th Aug 2022 3:26pm
I'm quite certain I'm not good. Just working on becoming ok with that... and so I keep looping through this madness over and over.
Lots to think about here.
❤️k
Lots to think about here.
❤️k
26th Aug 2022 00:52am
To me, you are so bad you are good, K...
:p
Thank you for this thought provoking comment...
:p
Thank you for this thought provoking comment...
