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As It Should Have Been

It was completely as it should have been.
We knew no hesitation.
All that was hers to give  
she gave. No small investment!  
How I wished for more to share in return, but  
I could only pour my imperfect lusts over her  
from the depths of my emptiness.  
 
Still, those moments of outpouring and receiving were beautiful!
LostViking
Written by LostViking (Lost Viking)
Published | Edited 27th Aug 2022
Author's Note
This is for a woman who gave herself completely. I was not equipped to reciprocate with love worthy of her and so I gave her what I had which wasn't enough.
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