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As It Should Have Been
It was completely as it should have been.
We knew no hesitation.
All that was hers to give
she gave. No small investment!
How I wished for more to share in return, but
I could only pour my imperfect lusts over her
from the depths of my emptiness.
Still, those moments of outpouring and receiving were beautiful!
We knew no hesitation.
All that was hers to give
she gave. No small investment!
How I wished for more to share in return, but
I could only pour my imperfect lusts over her
from the depths of my emptiness.
Still, those moments of outpouring and receiving were beautiful!
Published 24th Aug 2022
| Edited 27th Aug 2022
Author's Note
This is for a woman who gave herself completely. I was not equipped to reciprocate with love worthy of her and so I gave her what I had which wasn't enough.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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24th Aug 2022 7:34pm
25th Aug 2022 00:35am
Anonymous
25th Aug 2022 5:49pm
The need for desire, passion, release, etc is powerful for both men and women, which sometimes means the physical aspect isn't in lock step with the heart.... Hopefully she was understanding and there was still some warmth and gratification to be had.
Very real and interesting read.... It's reality. Life is simply messy sometimes.
I appreciate this share a great deal, LV
Good job!
🌹 💙
B
Very real and interesting read.... It's reality. Life is simply messy sometimes.
I appreciate this share a great deal, LV
Good job!
🌹 💙
B
Anonymous
6th Jan 2023 4:45pm
Funny how after time passes things seem to be "as it should have been "
