while you sleep

good morning dearest Sawyer thank you my friend I've been very selfish lately I'm glad you're still here 💕

hi Steve thank you you can call me Bren...I went a little crazy there... I saw my husband through another woman's eyes and realized she loved him it hurt to realize I had become complacent in my feelings I'm okay though I appreciate you listening ❤️

This poem struck a chord with me and hit me deeply, so relatable. Thank you for this write.

good morning beautiful Her thank you graciously I'm happy this spoke to you he is a very good man ❤️

Got chills reading this poem
Chills are my ultimate compliment
Beautifully crafted with a lot of message Brenda

BIG LIKE
BIG LOVE

good morning dearest Poet sometimes I forget you know? thank you for being here I have to grow up and realize I am not the center of anyone's universe... I deeply appreciate your presence 💕

Bittersweetness from deep within your heart of hearts....and it flows so deeply into my own.  

We're all imperfect, struggling in our own personal ways... yet you're magical in your bravery to pen those personal struggles with open abandon.  See how many relate?! ... and there's many more who do as well, I'm sure.

Selfish?... I'm sure you can feel that way sometimes...but what I and others see, is pure inspired courage. There's a bit of perspective in seeing yourself through someone else's eyes....  

Beautiful work  
that taught me volumes...  
Thank you for that, Bren  
🌹 💙  
B

good morning beautiful Blue thank you graciously lovely lady for the love here...if I am no longer in someone's inner circle of trust I have no one to blame but me it hurts still, that I really didn't recognize this all along or I just wasn't paying attention when I needed to be...some people give so much of themselves like you with so little returned...I want to be more of a giver and less of a taker what remains to be seen is if that is in me to do... you're a beautiful soul thank you 💕

thank you graciously beautiful poet I deeply appreciate the read and lovely comment 💕

While I sleep

I will always dream of you.
Because you always saw me.
and you still thought I was beautiful.
your voice whispered to my soul.

and you took the best piece of me.
holding your hand I knew I was special.
I was broken without you.
you took me inside your soul.
and saved me while we tour the earth.

so quickly we found love.
you wanted to be with me forever.
I didn't know what was good for me.

This mission of mercy was for me.
you relieved my pain.
I fueled your ache.

down deep I knew you were the one.
and I should have never let go.

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Such a beautiful spirit filled with so much passion and love.
Someone would be a fool to let go of that. ;)

good evening beautiful Kristina this is so loving what you've done here with your poem comment... I've been hurting because honestly I aged poorly and my husband aged well...there are always women looking at him with those eyes...I hurt because of this but holding onto too tight pushes people away...somewhere in time I am still beautiful you made me feel beautiful thank you 💕

Hi Crimsin

Such honesty in this. When I read your authors note it really hit me.
The different perspective. Everything is so beautiful in this. The Pic - the words - the feelings.
You channeled this perfectly amiga:)

hello lovely Adelphina thank you for feeling this write so deeply...your thoughtful comments made me glow 💕

Such a beautiful write and such honest self awareness shared. It is wonderful to be able to be honest with ourselves about our own shortcoming because then it is easier for us to forgive others. Such a heartfelt write dearest Brenda.

Keith

hello dearest Keith thank you graciously for such an insightful and loving comment ❤️

Dear B,

Overwhelmingly relatable piece. I’d only be copying the accolades from the above comments. Yet I resonate completely with your perceptions of yourself. I think we might be the harshest critics of our own behavior I also think it’s because we don’t want to be hurt anymore. The poignancy of this poem will be with me forever.
H🌷

hello beautiful Honoria thank you lovely one for your understanding heart I deeply cherish your presence and friendship 💕

Wonderful & beautiful Crim...

The nuances really communicate with my soul...

hello dearest Cipher thank you graciously my friend 💕

what a wonderful sentiment, it's like a haven for two who hold that special connection.