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Sometimes II
Sometimes
When we’re getting ready to go some place
I suffer from a change of direction
Its a fault of yours…
I lose my place
Lose track of time
You have a way of making me lose my mind
When we’re getting ready to go some place
I suffer from a change of direction
Its a fault of yours…
I lose my place
Lose track of time
You have a way of making me lose my mind
Published 23rd Aug 2022
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24th Aug 2022 4:25am
Dear AJ,
Wistful exhale. I totally enjoyed the simple emotion of getting lost in someone. The idea of me making you lose your mind…it’s a gift 😉
Absolutely lovely write. H🌷
Wistful exhale. I totally enjoyed the simple emotion of getting lost in someone. The idea of me making you lose your mind…it’s a gift 😉
Absolutely lovely write. H🌷
Anonymous
25th Aug 2022 00:19am
To lose one's self within... where space and time have no meaning... only her... only him....
Lost, yet so very found.
(I was going to apologize for the distraction but lovely Honoria had the same idea... great minds!)
Such a terrific read.
Thank you, J
🌹 - 💙
B
Lost, yet so very found.
(I was going to apologize for the distraction but lovely Honoria had the same idea... great minds!)
Such a terrific read.
Thank you, J
🌹 - 💙
B
Only her...only him, should mean more. Places, things, are at best distractions and at worst deadends. Love is to be fought for, earned and cherished, because that's all that really matters in the end. 🌼
And your current avatar is plenty distracting enough 😉
And your current avatar is plenty distracting enough 😉
