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to seduce the stars
so many eons a lady in waiting
wearing my pain like jewelry I attack
masochistic lust turned violent when I am starved
a Sadist altered his eye and proved the sky red
to amuse himself and to provoke
I wore the sun as a halo and was mocked
until I swallow the moon and conceived
groomed as a seductress capable in the arts
I bring up his ardor and lick his skill
in the kingdom of whores I am Queen
arrogance becomes me when seducing a martyr
who will put me in my place in due time
Published 21st Aug 2022
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21st Aug 2022 11:37pm
22nd Aug 2022 00:15am
Anonymous
22nd Aug 2022 4:57am
This feast of imagery pulled me in... teased, coaxed and then wickedly laughed as I was held prisoner.... (which I immensely loved)
All Hail The QUEEN!!
🙇🏻♀️
Many may try.... but no one writes the dark side of love and eroticism like you can.
And damn, lady—you wrote the hell out of this one. 🔥
From the title, to the stellar poem, to the choice of the perfect visual; it all comes together as this enormously vivid and wonderful sinful poetic triumph.
Bravo, dear Bren!
🥀🖤
x
All Hail The QUEEN!!
🙇🏻♀️
Many may try.... but no one writes the dark side of love and eroticism like you can.
And damn, lady—you wrote the hell out of this one. 🔥
From the title, to the stellar poem, to the choice of the perfect visual; it all comes together as this enormously vivid and wonderful sinful poetic triumph.
Bravo, dear Bren!
🥀🖤
x
22nd Aug 2022 6:03am
good evening beautiful Blue god you're lovely lady you picked up my spirits just like that... I've been struggling with my nature you brought me many smiles thank you gorgeous woman 💕
29th Aug 2022 9:22pm
