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Of fear, we must not be afraid,
For there is where the stupid hides
And the stupid wants the brave dismayed
Because it...to that fear abides,
And cannot think of something new
When in that stultifying state
Where the limbic brain begins to brew
Another batch of fear and hate.
The crucial thing is to defuse,
Or, deescalate the anxious you,
Or have your feelings take a cruise
With...an analytical review...
Which is where, wouldn't you know it,
You find your talent as a poet!
For there is where the stupid hides
And the stupid wants the brave dismayed
Because it...to that fear abides,
And cannot think of something new
When in that stultifying state
Where the limbic brain begins to brew
Another batch of fear and hate.
The crucial thing is to defuse,
Or, deescalate the anxious you,
Or have your feelings take a cruise
With...an analytical review...
Which is where, wouldn't you know it,
You find your talent as a poet!
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