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Who Do You Follow
Sitting in the starry heights
with Gautama he asks 'Who do you follow'
as opposed to 'What is trending'
I reply
" I follow not temporal gain
but autumnal rains' pregnant cascade
into mother's soil-awaiting new growth
measured steps through the Metu Neter
featuring new scope
The rareified crown that escapes the net
Gratitude and her sisters
Thankfulness-Appreciation-Joy
on a road just off a place called 'Clarity'
reserved until I get there
Sy4ndene Jahia
with Gautama he asks 'Who do you follow'
as opposed to 'What is trending'
I reply
" I follow not temporal gain
but autumnal rains' pregnant cascade
into mother's soil-awaiting new growth
measured steps through the Metu Neter
featuring new scope
The rareified crown that escapes the net
Gratitude and her sisters
Thankfulness-Appreciation-Joy
on a road just off a place called 'Clarity'
reserved until I get there
Sy4ndene Jahia
Published 21st Aug 2022
Author's Note
We are constantly led to believe that in following someone or something we become relevant in society to the detriment of just being and innerstanding the concept of stillness with the naturally mystical things of life
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21st Aug 2022 2:51am
wowee woman you brought the power
and it is beautiful and nourishing...
there is a power that takes
and a power that gives
I feel refreshed in your glow 💕
I hope there will come a day I can give back
I've been spinning on a negative wavelength
childishly thinking love could be captured and kept...
thank you ❤️
and it is beautiful and nourishing...
there is a power that takes
and a power that gives
I feel refreshed in your glow 💕
I hope there will come a day I can give back
I've been spinning on a negative wavelength
childishly thinking love could be captured and kept...
thank you ❤️
22nd Aug 2022 5:00am
Thank you so much for your sentient words crimsin (unveiling) it restores my faith in the potency of words and their ability to connect us all on a deeper level
And, the (negative) is the original feminine principle made manifest in the (word) so by this definition you have already cocooned real love within you and I too feel refreshed- :-) amazing
Thank you x
And, the (negative) is the original feminine principle made manifest in the (word) so by this definition you have already cocooned real love within you and I too feel refreshed- :-) amazing
Thank you x
21st Aug 2022 3:23am
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