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Whispy Thoughts
Thinking of you once again
And I shouldn't be
Telling myself to
Simply let it go
But it grows
I cut down
I cut it out
And it grows
And it grows
There's too much
Too many thoughts
And my brain keeps missing you
And I shouldn't be
Telling myself to
Simply let it go
But it grows
I cut down
I cut it out
And it grows
And it grows
There's too much
Too many thoughts
And my brain keeps missing you
Published 17th Aug 2022
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17th Aug 2022 2:04pm
18th Aug 2022 00:51am
It was completely accidental then I leaned into it. Kinda reminds me of the changing moon.
17th Aug 2022 2:33pm
18th Aug 2022 00:51am
Maybe they are not whispy thoughts but more Whiskey thoughts (lol) after all. Do you ever partake in necking/downing intoxicating liquor on occasion? The reason I ask is that I (not meaning to contradict you) get whispy/wistful thoughts after I've had a few too many pints of lager/beer, lol. 😉😈
18th Aug 2022 8:25am
I dont drink anymore due to medication but definitely have been there thought wise. I'd kill for a cocktail
18th Aug 2022 7:30pm
This is so wonderful and viscerally impactful... Yeah, the unintentional format really plays well with accentuating the feeling you expertly emanate, BBG.... great work.
I don't drink anymore either... but I'd also kill for a perfectly made old fashioned..... sigh...
So, here's a Cheers! 🥃*🍹 to our imaginary cocktails and a terrifically penned poem ;)
B-♡
x
I don't drink anymore either... but I'd also kill for a perfectly made old fashioned..... sigh...
So, here's a Cheers! 🥃*🍹 to our imaginary cocktails and a terrifically penned poem ;)
B-♡
x
18th Aug 2022 9:33pm
Probably one of my favorite poems visually. And yes! Cheers within our imagination cocktail hours 💙
27th Aug 2022 4:16pm
