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The Test of Time
Are there really any
Tests for measuring
True love relationships
If so one of them is not
The test of time
That one has failed
For me
Time after time
Tests for measuring
True love relationships
If so one of them is not
The test of time
That one has failed
For me
Time after time
Published 13th Aug 2022
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13th Aug 2022 8:32pm
Actually, I think your poem proves that time is in fact a test. However, the rub is most prefer not to use long-periods of time for the test to be effective. A quicker test is needed. I think when you look back, you realize there were tell tale incidents that were overlooked. Experience, that may be a test!
Yes, they were there but my addiction to romance made me blinde to them at the time. Believe me, I have learned my lesson and learned it well. I enjoyed your comments.
14th Aug 2022 3:02am
14th Aug 2022 3:18am
15th Aug 2022 1:42am
Dear F,
Wish I knew but do know I appreciated this write as way to at least baseline a relationship. I really liked your musings in this piece. H🌷
Wish I knew but do know I appreciated this write as way to at least baseline a relationship. I really liked your musings in this piece. H🌷
