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STIRRED UP POOL

Lying outspread  
upon the bed,  
her trim V-patch  
framed her wet snatch.  

'Twixt legs apart.
so like a heart
appeared those lips,
flushed like rosehips.

What he'd worked up,  
he took a sup,  
his tongue circling  
the opening.  

And then he drew  
himself into  
those opened lips  
between her hips.  
 
Her stirred-up pool  
welcomed his tool  
for her delight  
that wedding night.
Solomon_Song
Written by Solomon_Song
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Author's Note
The poem and title grew out of its last verse, rather than the first. Inspired by Goldenyst's 'Consummation of a Marriage - Female POV, in particular these lines:

All is fluid motion of...
The poem and title grew out of its last verse, rather than the first. Inspired by Goldenyst's 'Consummation of a Marriage - Female POV, in particular these lines:

All is fluid motion of flame
Swirling in sea of molten lava
Flesh melding into flesh
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