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Release
She sighs, tenderly brushing the tears
From his eyes
Holding him
After his body gave way
To eruption after eruption
Her mark stinging
His body quaking
This giant of a man
Never
Saw
It
Coming
Tenderly, she brushes tears from his eyes
From his eyes
Holding him
After his body gave way
To eruption after eruption
Her mark stinging
His body quaking
This giant of a man
Never
Saw
It
Coming
Tenderly, she brushes tears from his eyes
Published 13th Aug 2022
| Edited 2nd Sep 2024
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Found the background music on someone’s public playlist on YouTube. I can’t find the owner. And I suck at making videos. I have no idea what I'm doing. I could use a lil help if anyone would like to volunteer to teach me...
Turning the tables
Found the background music on someone’s public playlist on YouTube. I can’t find the owner. And I suck at making videos. I have no idea what I'm doing. I could use a lil help if anyone would like to volunteer to teach me...
Turning the tables
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13th Aug 2022 7:54am
Anonymous
13th Aug 2022 1:40pm
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14th Aug 2022 12:23pm
16th Aug 2022 5:20am
Love how you put into words the sweet submission of a man to his woman. There is something about the way you played this out and especially the emotional underpinnings that really worked for me. I truly felt this.
John
John
8th Sep 2022 3:39am
28th Jan 2023 9:38pm
You verbally released me
From the tears that I had felt
Tears of joy and happiness
From my cock within your pelt
My eruptions from the suction
Of your tightness on my wood
I knew that it would happen
Not knowing it would feel so good
As you were cumming with me
You had tears of your own
I wiped them from your misty eyes
We no longer were alone
From the tears that I had felt
Tears of joy and happiness
From my cock within your pelt
My eruptions from the suction
Of your tightness on my wood
I knew that it would happen
Not knowing it would feel so good
As you were cumming with me
You had tears of your own
I wiped them from your misty eyes
We no longer were alone
28th Jan 2023 9:46pm
Anonymous
- Edited 16th Mar 2023 7:45pm
28th Jan 2023 10:08pm
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28th Jan 2023 10:11pm
Absolutely twice the piece with the read, go girl you smashed it
Love and light
Ron x
Love and light
Ron x
7th Nov 2023 12:40pm
7th Nov 2023 12:45pm
29th Apr 2024 11:17pm
29th Apr 2024 11:18pm
29th Apr 2024 11:32pm
What is this? This is not acceptable… we can’t accept our eruptions after eruptions especially after hear that voice…. Unacceptably beautiful poem…. Now Im crying
29th Apr 2024 11:33pm
