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We Made it to the Show
The words were stunning,
Redefined
By the position
In the
Brain,
So very personalized.
He just sat there
In a
Daze.
How did this come to be?
As he walked away
Into
An unfolding whiteness
The cracks
Began
To
Show...
Published 10th Aug 2022
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10th Aug 2022 2:15pm
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10th Aug 2022 2:41pm
Thought provoking. My mind wants to make up a whole character & back story from this little snippet.
11th Aug 2022 7:28am
10th Aug 2022 7:02pm
11th Aug 2022 7:28am
Love the idea of the dope show and questioning how it all began.
I'm drawn in immediately with curiosity.
Great way to pull in the reader!!
Love that the last word is show. LOL
Brilliant amigo
I'm drawn in immediately with curiosity.
Great way to pull in the reader!!
Love that the last word is show. LOL
Brilliant amigo
12th Aug 2022 10:17am
