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Fighting
drops of crimson on the floor
by the bed
round drops
a mini galaxy
of planets
there are busy bees
in my head
my eyelids heavy
sleep hung on my eyelashes
cool bed
voices
and I wake up
to reproaching eyes.
by the bed
round drops
a mini galaxy
of planets
there are busy bees
in my head
my eyelids heavy
sleep hung on my eyelashes
cool bed
voices
and I wake up
to reproaching eyes.
Published 7th Aug 2022
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A Dream
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7th Aug 2022 11:56pm
8th Aug 2022 1:19am
8th Aug 2022 7:18am
Dear G,
I think this piece is so relatable after an unrestful sleep. All the nerves in the body seem at odds with each other. You capture that anxiety so well in this poem. H🌷
I think this piece is so relatable after an unrestful sleep. All the nerves in the body seem at odds with each other. You capture that anxiety so well in this poem. H🌷
18th Aug 2022 9:53pm
8th Aug 2022 2:40pm
I love the sense of the macrocosmic and microcosmic in your description. It's good to see you honey.
18th Aug 2022 9:55pm
