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A nice feeling
Something so simple
As saying
Call me when u get home
In my mind it felt like a hug
There once was a time
When I didn't appreciate those words
But last night
It meant everything
Just layed down and went to sleep
As saying
Call me when u get home
In my mind it felt like a hug
There once was a time
When I didn't appreciate those words
But last night
It meant everything
Just layed down and went to sleep
Published 7th Aug 2022
Author's Note
Just a conversation that I'm sure will be taken out of context somehow
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7th Aug 2022 9:23pm
Hopefully into a peaceful slumber!
This is solid writing, even within the brevity. Good stuff.
This is solid writing, even within the brevity. Good stuff.
8th Aug 2022 9:06am
17th Aug 2022 7:30pm
18th Aug 2022 10:57am
As in I had just layed down by myself and when to sleep peacefully. Not staying awake til my eyes roll back in my head and shut down. The person I was referring to gives me a peaceful feeling except when I now know it wasn't even that person texting.
26th Aug 2022 8:57am
4th Sep 2022 9:28am
This simple and true feeling is the reality of life. It's the only thing that remains.
