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Welcome to my mind
Welcome to my mind
Hardwired and defined
Take a look
But watch out for the Metaphorical
Storm inside
Surprised you will be
At the complexity
Sincerity is part of me
Morality like a see saw of Reality
Balancing the scales of lunacy
Sporadic thoughts dark and light
Fused together in unity
Can't you see
Some say I am clever
So I must endeavour
To put these words in my mind together
So I can share my poetic pleasure
With the Dup community that I treasure
However
My mood can change
From one day to another
An angry empath trying to find his way
So I will end this with a fuck you
But have a lovley day.....
Hardwired and defined
Take a look
But watch out for the Metaphorical
Storm inside
Surprised you will be
At the complexity
Sincerity is part of me
Morality like a see saw of Reality
Balancing the scales of lunacy
Sporadic thoughts dark and light
Fused together in unity
Can't you see
Some say I am clever
So I must endeavour
To put these words in my mind together
So I can share my poetic pleasure
With the Dup community that I treasure
However
My mood can change
From one day to another
An angry empath trying to find his way
So I will end this with a fuck you
But have a lovley day.....
Author's Note
The balance of dark and light, plus my crazy mind 🤪 👊
Those who know me know I mean no offence, well hopefully anyway 🤣🤣
Those who know me know I mean no offence, well hopefully anyway 🤣🤣
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Re. Welcome to my mind
4th Aug 2022 12:07pm
Re: Re. Welcome to my mind
4th Aug 2022 12:10pm
Afternoon wired6
I am okay thanks hun 😁
Hope you're doing well also
Thanks for stopping by and sharing your thoughts with me 🌷
I am okay thanks hun 😁
Hope you're doing well also
Thanks for stopping by and sharing your thoughts with me 🌷
Re: Re. Welcome to my mind
4th Aug 2022 12:16pm
Re. Welcome to my mind
4th Aug 2022 12:53pm
I too feel that battle between the opposing forces in my own mind, its always a comfort when I come across poems that I can relate to. This one is a reflection of conflictions in myself and my deep gratitude of being able to express that and share that experience with others.
It was this line that spoke the loudest to me, "Morality like a see saw of Reality ". It made me think about the way those emotions come to the surface, then a moral battle ensues.
Thank you so much for giving my mind something to chew on.
It was this line that spoke the loudest to me, "Morality like a see saw of Reality ". It made me think about the way those emotions come to the surface, then a moral battle ensues.
Thank you so much for giving my mind something to chew on.
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Re: Re. Welcome to my mind
4th Aug 2022 1:47pm
Hey DK
It's very refreshing to know I am not the only one
I am usually an upbeat and kind hearted soul,
But now again the demons push me to struggle for the balance of morality.
I really appreciate your honest feedback and taking the time to read and comment 👍
Have a great day 😁
Kind regards
Sms ✨️
It's very refreshing to know I am not the only one
I am usually an upbeat and kind hearted soul,
But now again the demons push me to struggle for the balance of morality.
I really appreciate your honest feedback and taking the time to read and comment 👍
Have a great day 😁
Kind regards
Sms ✨️
Re. Welcome to my mind
4th Aug 2022 1:18pm
Re: Re. Welcome to my mind
4th Aug 2022 1:50pm
Thanks very much LDF
I always appreciate your insights
Have yourself a great day hun 😘
Warm regards
Sms 💖
I always appreciate your insights
Have yourself a great day hun 😘
Warm regards
Sms 💖
Re: Re. Welcome to my mind
4th Aug 2022 7:35pm
Re. Welcome to my mind
4th Aug 2022 4:19pm
Damn, that picture is awesome to start - really sets the stage for the words although they set themselves without it but I think it's a great accompaniment. I was thinking oh God, what it would be like to be in my mind. It's hard enough for me to be there much less anyone else. Always so complicated, but always so sincere. It's hard to balance the scales of lunacy, and you are so right on morality. It's incredible what people without morals will do to someone else. Something I have learned the hard way. That balance you mentioned feeding into the light and dark trying to maintain a semblance of 'normalcy' while keeping from imploding or exploding. Yes, you are clever... And it's so wonderful you are here to share that poetic pleasure. 'Fuck you but have a lovely day', can mean so many things. :p But sometimes you must let it out. There are many ways to do that and I can think of some fun ones. lol
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Re: Re. Welcome to my mind
5th Aug 2022 8:30am
Hey trouble,
Isn't it a cool picture 😎
It was actually the picture that gave. Me the idea in the first place.
I love your mind, it's awesome 👌
Yes trying to balance the somewhat normality and the the psychotic tendencies can be a struggle for sure, but don't they make for the best forms of expression also 🤣
That's the beauty of poetry, there is something for every emotion 😍
I am glad you're happy I am here and the feeling is very mutual and you will have to fill me in on these ideas you have about letting it all out 😜
Thank you very much for your kind words and support and for being you.
You're awesome 👌
Warm regards 💖
Sms 🌷
Isn't it a cool picture 😎
It was actually the picture that gave. Me the idea in the first place.
I love your mind, it's awesome 👌
Yes trying to balance the somewhat normality and the the psychotic tendencies can be a struggle for sure, but don't they make for the best forms of expression also 🤣
That's the beauty of poetry, there is something for every emotion 😍
I am glad you're happy I am here and the feeling is very mutual and you will have to fill me in on these ideas you have about letting it all out 😜
Thank you very much for your kind words and support and for being you.
You're awesome 👌
Warm regards 💖
Sms 🌷
Re. Welcome to my mind
4th Aug 2022 4:30pm
Haha!!!This is spot on!I believe many of us can relate;We plagued/blessed with a bipolarity playfield/minefield~
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Re: Re. Welcome to my mind
5th Aug 2022 8:32am
Hey peninnah
Thanks for stopping by and sharing your thoughts with me 🙏
For sure the battle is ongoing, but some epic episodes of expression will surely come with it, so all is great 🤣🤣
Regards sms
Thanks for stopping by and sharing your thoughts with me 🙏
For sure the battle is ongoing, but some epic episodes of expression will surely come with it, so all is great 🤣🤣
Regards sms
Re. Welcome to my mind
4th Aug 2022 6:15pm
I liked the matter of fact approach of this one. The rap battle finish was cool too!
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Re: Re. Welcome to my mind
5th Aug 2022 8:35am
Hey Jay
That's always my way mate, all or nothing 👍
I always think the best poetry comes from the heart and a crazy mind helps too 🤘
Thanks for sharing your thoughts 🙏
It's much appreciated mate
Regards
Sms
That's always my way mate, all or nothing 👍
I always think the best poetry comes from the heart and a crazy mind helps too 🤘
Thanks for sharing your thoughts 🙏
It's much appreciated mate
Regards
Sms
Re. Welcome to my mind
4th Aug 2022 8:56pm
Re: Re. Welcome to my mind
5th Aug 2022 8:38am
Hi Keilani
Thanks so much, your support is very much appreciated 👌
Have a great day hun ✨️
Regards
Sms 🌷
Thanks so much, your support is very much appreciated 👌
Have a great day hun ✨️
Regards
Sms 🌷
Re: Re. Welcome to my mind
5th Aug 2022 3:42pm