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Senryu Quartet In Defense of Love and Kindness
Heart by love tempered
whole soul gainst enmity steeled
come now peace of mind
Kindness only builds
hatred's sole purpose, destroy
life's rιsumι shows
True love germinates
in soil devoid of rancor
may life's thumb be green
Kindness will prevail
though battles by malice won
choose your side wisely
whole soul gainst enmity steeled
come now peace of mind
Kindness only builds
hatred's sole purpose, destroy
life's rιsumι shows
True love germinates
in soil devoid of rancor
may life's thumb be green
Kindness will prevail
though battles by malice won
choose your side wisely
Author's Note
I'm a huge fan, proponent, try-to-be disciple of love and kindness.
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Re. Senryu Quartet In Defense of Love and Kindness
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3rd Aug 2022 4:19pm
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3rd Aug 2022 4:55pm
Thank you so much, deathkitty! I am pleased that you like this poem. Love is the cure.
Re. Senryu Quartet In Defense of Love and Kindness
3rd Aug 2022 4:20pm
Dear GW,
Wow. Each stanza is like a pocket prayer. Reminders of how to be a human being again. I really enjoyed these lovely pieces within the piece! In conjunction with your authors note, I dont think anyone would mistake you for anything other than a disciple of love and kindness! Beautiful write. H🌷
Wow. Each stanza is like a pocket prayer. Reminders of how to be a human being again. I really enjoyed these lovely pieces within the piece! In conjunction with your authors note, I dont think anyone would mistake you for anything other than a disciple of love and kindness! Beautiful write. H🌷
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3rd Aug 2022 5:28pm
Dearest, Honoria
I am humbled by your assessment of my discipleship...got all emotional. I wish that I could be as kind to myself as I am to others. I appreciate the kindness you have shown me over our time together. You epitomize love and kindness. I am thrilled that you are touched by this piece💕
I am humbled by your assessment of my discipleship...got all emotional. I wish that I could be as kind to myself as I am to others. I appreciate the kindness you have shown me over our time together. You epitomize love and kindness. I am thrilled that you are touched by this piece💕
Re. Senryu Quartet In Defense of Love and Kindness
Anonymous
3rd Aug 2022 4:27pm
It certainly takes guts to be gentle & kind. You have it in abundance. If only life was that simple and cut & dry my friend.
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3rd Aug 2022 5:57pm
Thank you, Rob for your beautiful comment. At least we're trying to be kind. I agree completely that it takes guts to be kind. Hate comes too easy these days. I realize my outlook in these pieces is utopianistic but one can dream, right?
Re. Senryu Quartet In Defense of Love and Kindness
3rd Aug 2022 9:44pm
Beautiful. I'm also convinced that love is always the answer... but kindness can be so hard sometimes!! All our instincts of pride & self-preservation fight against us on this, but it's important to always try. You, my friend, are a kind soul. Lovely, challenging write.
❤️k
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22nd Aug 2022 10:46am
Dear, K
I agree wholeheartedlt about love. I se kindness as an outward manifestation of our love of self and anyone with whom we have contact. You are right when you express how hard it is to be kind. Abraham Lincoln, with this question, expressed perfectly my idealist view of showing kindness to all. "Do I not destroy my enemies by makingb them friends?"
I agree wholeheartedlt about love. I se kindness as an outward manifestation of our love of self and anyone with whom we have contact. You are right when you express how hard it is to be kind. Abraham Lincoln, with this question, expressed perfectly my idealist view of showing kindness to all. "Do I not destroy my enemies by makingb them friends?"
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22nd Aug 2022 7:22pm
Oooh, I like that quote! Definitely idealistic... but nicer than the one in the bible about heaping burning coals on your enemy's head by showing them kindness! That one always seemed to miss the point, in my mind... LOL 😆
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Re. Senryu Quartet In Defense of Love and Kindness
Anonymous
- Edited 16th Aug 2022 12:05pm
4th Aug 2022 3:27am
I'm also a huge believer in kindness, love, honesty and karma, dear BB. I've had several instances occur in my life where it would've definitely been easier to crumble and wallow within the darkness; becoming jaded and awful. Yet, I chose differently. It's taken a lot of introspective work tending to loads of scar tissue to learn that kindness, love, respect and compassion will ALWAYS win out in the end.
Rob was spot on in saying life isn't simple nor cut and dry. That's a key point to reflect upon.
I understand now more than ever, humans are messy and complex; I can only control and be responsible for myself and my own heart's truth. I choose to be of light and love, even when there are times that press down upon making it nearly impossible to navigate my way through the darkness.
I love senryϊ, as you know; yours are so uplifting and consequential! You hit this poignant, visceral quartet out of the park with your lovely poetic voice showcasing your big, beautiful heart. Oh how it ringings out so loud and crystal clear.
Bravo!
For me It's almost like the poem version of your singing....(that's how profoundly I see it and feel it )
Thank you for sharing your majestic nature; I adore soaking it all in.
Much love, BB
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Rob was spot on in saying life isn't simple nor cut and dry. That's a key point to reflect upon.
I understand now more than ever, humans are messy and complex; I can only control and be responsible for myself and my own heart's truth. I choose to be of light and love, even when there are times that press down upon making it nearly impossible to navigate my way through the darkness.
I love senryϊ, as you know; yours are so uplifting and consequential! You hit this poignant, visceral quartet out of the park with your lovely poetic voice showcasing your big, beautiful heart. Oh how it ringings out so loud and crystal clear.
Bravo!
For me It's almost like the poem version of your singing....(that's how profoundly I see it and feel it )
Thank you for sharing your majestic nature; I adore soaking it all in.
Much love, BB
🌹💙
🐻💋🐰
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Re. Senryu Quartet In Defense of Love and Kindness
5th Aug 2022 1:11am
I love this! Kindness has no consequence. Well stated lovely Gahddess. Bless. Thank you for this write.
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5th Aug 2022 2:54am
Thank you so much, Mel❣ I am humbled, thrilled, nay chuffed that you find value in this piece and that it in some way touched you❣
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13th Aug 2022 7:48am
Being good and with virtuos values is always productive and important. Just because we live in an anti utopia, does not mean that it is Normal and a standard
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14th Aug 2022 5:31am
I agree, Aaron
I admire, respect, and try to emulate those who are unwavering in their kindness toward others. Thank you for reading my piece and leaving such a thoughtful comment.
I admire, respect, and try to emulate those who are unwavering in their kindness toward others. Thank you for reading my piece and leaving such a thoughtful comment.
Re. Senryu Quartet In Defense of Love and Kindness
Love and kindness should always be defended. It seems so easy for people to hate and intense hatred can find you anywhere. So often for no reason other than destruction. And hate tries to tear down the kindness in you too. To make you like that and when you are not it often comes at you harder looking for that response. Wanting to feel that hate grow inside of you too. To make you ugly too. And for what? to share misery. To kill that love, compassion, and kindness in you. You should never allow those things to be taken from you. You should share them with the people that matter and people that are actually kind and compassionate. Actions speak louder than words. People often say they are one way while acting another. And if you respond to hate you only fuel the fire. Always choose your side wisely, the side that helps you grow and doesn't tear you down. Don't waste a minute engaging with people that only want to make you feel terrible and take away those things that make you a beautiful person.
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