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Crazy Love
i can finally
reject pain
and pleasure
to others it appears
he doesn’t
love me
how could he
love me yet
promise
to
bathe
in my tears
to
bruise
my flesh
to
threaten (promise)
sadistic acts
i can finally
reject pain
and pleasure
i never
feel
unloved
never
feel
concern about losing love
he loved me less when
he couldn’t express
his evil on my skin
he loves me
more
now
trusting himself to
know which protests
to disregard
i can finally
reject pain
and pleasure
the more responsible
he feels
for my safety
the more comfortable
he feels taking me to
dangerous places
each inch of rope i release
is an inch he controls
until i have nothing
i can finally reject
pain
and pleasure
or accept them
(C)2022 Raibeart Bruis
reject pain
and pleasure
to others it appears
he doesn’t
love me
how could he
love me yet
promise
to
bathe
in my tears
to
bruise
my flesh
to
threaten (promise)
sadistic acts
i can finally
reject pain
and pleasure
i never
feel
unloved
never
feel
concern about losing love
he loved me less when
he couldn’t express
his evil on my skin
he loves me
more
now
trusting himself to
know which protests
to disregard
i can finally
reject pain
and pleasure
the more responsible
he feels
for my safety
the more comfortable
he feels taking me to
dangerous places
each inch of rope i release
is an inch he controls
until i have nothing
i can finally reject
pain
and pleasure
or accept them
(C)2022 Raibeart Bruis
Published 2nd Aug 2022
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2nd Aug 2022 5:15pm
You really captured so much about the psychology of submission. Not everyone understands what is to be gained by such guilty pleasures but it can be so liberating. Accepting pleasure and pain, feeling everything intensely. And not needing to be in control, just experiencing things as they come. Not needing to make decisions or think about all the difficulties in life. And that bond that forms where 'he loves me more'. 'the more comfortable he feels taking me to dangerous places' is one of my favortie lines. How incredible it is to build that trust. Love this KP.
