Now or now

Like adding a little salt to recipe, so it balances out the sweetness... (is how adding those words, sort of feel to me!)  
 
I adore the way your lyrics seem to build and build and how you create and set a scene within my mind's eye... some lovely imagery and the ending leaves the ache of 'want' echoing.... which I absolutely loved.  
 
Great work, dear Marks  
Thank you for sharing with us 🙏  
🌹 💙  
B

Thank you very much, Bluevelvete.

So often it is unexpected but always seductive isn't it? It always feels like too long somehow, it always feel like now or never. But love is always calling... and it is what keeps us young. Those intense feelings of love and passion that keeps us feeling everything. And those hormones are the fountain of youth. I love the rhythm of this Marks. It's really great!

Thank you for your comment, KristinaX.
Thank you for adding these songlyrics to your  Reading List.

Such a beautiful thought. . .  "A man and a woman just like two rainbows."   Like two becoming one, in such a magical way.  

I like how you say, it's * now or now *  Now, now, now ! !  
You know what you want.   😊

Thank you for your comment, bcharmed (Brandy B).

"I'm a river
She's the ocean"
^^^^
if these aren't the
most romantic {or sexiest}
lines I've read then I'll be damned.
they just reached out
& grabbed me by the throat.
... since you have indicated that you
prefer honest critique,
i'll add my 2 cents;
the use of demagogue & populist
is a tad jarring,
the words feel like an afterthought
rather than a necessity
buuuuut that's just my opinion
feel free to tell me to get stuffed XD

♡ yiyi

Thank you for your comment.

You made me feel like a butterfly flying through a field of tulips... She is ... ... unavoidable desire to fly!

PAR

Thank you for your comment, PAR.

Love the phrase now is now. I only believe in the now.
Beautiful poem.

Thank you, deliabear (Debbie).

Such divine rhetoric. Thanks for sharing your amazing talent. Hugs and peace, Oral

Thank you very much, TheOralizer.

This reads like it would make a good performance piece. It has a good pace to it.

Thank you for your comment, Casted_Runes.

Very interesting reading. Keep up the good work.

Thank you, CasketSharpe.

The call of Love though unexpected we answer and embrace.. we turn young in heart.. life flows in veins.. music enchants the soul.. time loses its weight and we just fly on the wings of love with no delay.. I so much enjoyed reading your poetry! Stay blessed with love.

Thank you very much for your comment, MySmile(Besma).