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Sun Beam
Hanging on a prayer
Replacing things that aren't there
Weight pressing on my chest
My spirit needs to rest
Avoidance hopes to stall
Doom from the upcoming fall
Inhaling everything compressed
Good Intentions make a mess
Building on a prayer
Replacing all my broken stairs
So I can climb up high
Stream with the sun across the sky
Engulfing me
Carrying me
Leaving all my weight
Beneath me
While I’m hidden within a
Sun Beam
Replacing things that aren't there
Weight pressing on my chest
My spirit needs to rest
Avoidance hopes to stall
Doom from the upcoming fall
Inhaling everything compressed
Good Intentions make a mess
Building on a prayer
Replacing all my broken stairs
So I can climb up high
Stream with the sun across the sky
Engulfing me
Carrying me
Leaving all my weight
Beneath me
While I’m hidden within a
Sun Beam
Author's Note
I hate doing yearly physicals!!! But I gotta bite the bullet
and make one soon. I can avoid things till
the bitter end - then finally I will cave. LOL
and make one soon. I can avoid things till
the bitter end - then finally I will cave. LOL
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Re. Sun Beam
31st Jul 2022 1:31am
Well at least you get one, there are to many that die from preventable causes. We liked the flow to this piece Lady, tight work
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Re: Re. Sun Beam
31st Jul 2022 1:36am
Thank you!!
Ughhh, I know you are right - It's just uncomfortable.
Thanks for liking my flow:)
Ughhh, I know you are right - It's just uncomfortable.
Thanks for liking my flow:)
Re. Sun Beam
31st Jul 2022 2:06am
Dear A,
Ugh! Totally get it. But stop procrastinating and just get it over with, said she with a wagging index finger 😉
I’m just funnin ya! But really…
Great thought process turning into great poetry about a really real angst. I liked the rhyme a lot and the subject is very relatable. Despite what I’m saying here. (Now get ye arse to the drs xo)
Well done. H🌷
Ugh! Totally get it. But stop procrastinating and just get it over with, said she with a wagging index finger 😉
I’m just funnin ya! But really…
Great thought process turning into great poetry about a really real angst. I liked the rhyme a lot and the subject is very relatable. Despite what I’m saying here. (Now get ye arse to the drs xo)
Well done. H🌷
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Re: Re. Sun Beam
31st Jul 2022 2:12am
Hi H:)
They have always gone well - which is why I procrastinate.
In that way I'm like my dad. If it's not broke don't fix it.
But sometimes things are hidden - so yes - I will heed
your advice H:)
Thanks for stopping by and the RL
Have a wonderful weekend amiga:)
They have always gone well - which is why I procrastinate.
In that way I'm like my dad. If it's not broke don't fix it.
But sometimes things are hidden - so yes - I will heed
your advice H:)
Thanks for stopping by and the RL
Have a wonderful weekend amiga:)
Re. Sun Beam
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31st Jul 2022 3:39am
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Re: Re. Sun Beam
1st Aug 2022 2:34am
Hi Sawyer
I know, I know:)
I'm going!!
But I got to go shopping first. LOL
I was in a rhymie mood when I wrote. hahaha
Thanks for all your snaps amigo!!!
I know, I know:)
I'm going!!
But I got to go shopping first. LOL
I was in a rhymie mood when I wrote. hahaha
Thanks for all your snaps amigo!!!
Re. Sun Beam
31st Jul 2022 1:39pm
Re: Re. Sun Beam
1st Aug 2022 2:41am
Hey Cipher:)
Thank you so much!!!
Honestly - missed your comments amigo:)
Don't get a big head or anything.
It was just an itsy bitsy tiny bit. LOL
In all seriousness doctor appointments scare me.
In my mind I see nurses rush back into the room - rush me
to the emergency room for an emergency surgery!!!
this is how my mind works.
Paranoid - yeah just a little:)
Thanks for the RL and commenting:)
Thank you so much!!!
Honestly - missed your comments amigo:)
Don't get a big head or anything.
It was just an itsy bitsy tiny bit. LOL
In all seriousness doctor appointments scare me.
In my mind I see nurses rush back into the room - rush me
to the emergency room for an emergency surgery!!!
this is how my mind works.
Paranoid - yeah just a little:)
Thanks for the RL and commenting:)
Re. Sun Beam
31st Jul 2022 1:58pm
Re: Re. Sun Beam
1st Aug 2022 2:43am
I know right!! Afterwards, I always feel better - like weight has been lifted - it's just getting me through the door that's the problem. hahah
Thanks for stopping by for a comment buddy:)
Thanks for stopping by for a comment buddy:)
Re. Sun Beam
31st Jul 2022 5:34pm
So sweet and cheerful reading this ! I was cloudy brained today up til this. Lol.
What a wonderful job, written well and great flow to it.
Good luck on the physical. I hope everything is in proper working order, etc. There's enough blah going around, huh. So here's to good news!
What a wonderful job, written well and great flow to it.
Good luck on the physical. I hope everything is in proper working order, etc. There's enough blah going around, huh. So here's to good news!
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Re: Re. Sun Beam
1st Aug 2022 2:59am
Hey Styx!!!
What a sweet comment:) Thank you so much.
You just put sprinkles on my Sunday. hahah
I was in a rhymie mood yesterday.
Thanks for the good luck wish. I will take all the good
karma I can get. When I had my wisdom teeth pulled so many years ago it was an oral surgery. The dentist couldn't wake me
up. They even called my mom into the room to help.
Ever since then I'm terrified of being put under - scared I won't wake up. So yeah- no biggie. LOL
Hope you had a great Sunday:)
Thanks for stopping by and the RL
Fixing to read yours in a bit:)
What a sweet comment:) Thank you so much.
You just put sprinkles on my Sunday. hahah
I was in a rhymie mood yesterday.
Thanks for the good luck wish. I will take all the good
karma I can get. When I had my wisdom teeth pulled so many years ago it was an oral surgery. The dentist couldn't wake me
up. They even called my mom into the room to help.
Ever since then I'm terrified of being put under - scared I won't wake up. So yeah- no biggie. LOL
Hope you had a great Sunday:)
Thanks for stopping by and the RL
Fixing to read yours in a bit:)
Re: Re. Sun Beam
1st Aug 2022 3:20am
Um, dear, they don't "put you under" for a physical. If that is part of the plan, run!
I'm so glad I'm a dude. Lol. We're mostly low maintenance and low chances of being weirded out by yucky people in this world.
I'm so glad I'm a dude. Lol. We're mostly low maintenance and low chances of being weirded out by yucky people in this world.
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Re: Re. Sun Beam
1st Aug 2022 3:25am
But in my mind they rush back into the room and rush me to the emergency room. Yes - in an ambulance. With sirens blazing!! Never mind the hospital is just next door. And they use the word "stat" a lot. Which means hurry that ass up!! Then I don't wake up and have a freak accident like Joan Rivers!!!
See this is how my mind works. LOL
See this is how my mind works. LOL
Re: Re. Sun Beam
1st Aug 2022 3:32am
The secret to everything is to just tell yourself that it is going to work out okay. Because it almost always does. And even if it doesn't, being rational will get you through it sooner.
(I just talked to God. He said to tell you not to worry. He's got ya!).
(I just talked to God. He said to tell you not to worry. He's got ya!).
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Re: Re. Sun Beam
1st Aug 2022 3:38am
Re. Sun Beam
1st Aug 2022 2:28am
Chica, I will do your physical; you know you are going to get a thorough evaluation and come out shining, I mean with a shining bill of health and all that because anyone can see you what good shape you are in. ;) Am I supposed to get a physical at the doctor, damn! maybe I should do that I guess. This definitely had some other meanings for me but I definitely want to think about giving the physical instead. So let's stick with that... ;) Beautiful work as always, love the expression emotion in your unique style.
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Re: Re. Sun Beam
1st Aug 2022 3:07am
Hey Kristina:)
Girl - don't tempt me. LOL
I just hate going!! Getting my blood drawn - I hate needles.
I literally have to turn to look away otherwise I get light headed.
I weigh like 105 pounds so sometimes it leaves me a little
light headed, Don't ask me how I gave birth!!! hahahah
Thanks you so much for the great karma chica:)
You are awesome!!!
Girl - don't tempt me. LOL
I just hate going!! Getting my blood drawn - I hate needles.
I literally have to turn to look away otherwise I get light headed.
I weigh like 105 pounds so sometimes it leaves me a little
light headed, Don't ask me how I gave birth!!! hahahah
Thanks you so much for the great karma chica:)
You are awesome!!!
Re. Sun Beam
1st Aug 2022 2:43am
Re: Re. Sun Beam
1st Aug 2022 3:09am
Hey Billy Blue!!!
Renewable energy is the way to go amigo!! hahaha
Still laughing about your PM. That video was hilarious.
Renewable energy is the way to go amigo!! hahaha
Still laughing about your PM. That video was hilarious.
Re. Sun Beam
1st Aug 2022 3:02am
Take off your clothes Hot Sauce
Dr. KX will see you soon. You're in for a wild time,
She should pay you ...
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Dr. KX will see you soon. You're in for a wild time,
She should pay you ...
BIG LIKE
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Re: Re. Sun Beam
1st Aug 2022 3:14am
Hey PS
That is brilliant!! I think will charge her.
My doctor is pretty awesome and female so
I will see what she says. hahahah
Doctor offices just freak me out like police
departments. That's a whole other story. LOL
Thanks for stopping by amigo:)
That is brilliant!! I think will charge her.
My doctor is pretty awesome and female so
I will see what she says. hahahah
Doctor offices just freak me out like police
departments. That's a whole other story. LOL
Thanks for stopping by amigo:)
Re: Re. Sun Beam
1st Aug 2022 3:20am
Re: Re. Sun Beam
1st Aug 2022 3:27am
Awhh thanks PS!!
Oh lordy - you should know I can get out of cuffs pretty easy;)
Just saying
Oh lordy - you should know I can get out of cuffs pretty easy;)
Just saying
Re. Sun Beam
5th Aug 2022 5:41pm
Anxiety for the long quiet murder. I feel this. I recently wrote about it as well. Such a mutherfuck.
Cheers.
Cheers.
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Re: Re. Sun Beam
5th Aug 2022 5:53pm
Hey Bryan:)
Anxiety can kill - no joke. I need to have the mentality of
tear off the Band-Aid quick. LOL Just get it over with - then I'm good for a whole other year.
I'm going to have to check out your page in a bit:)
Again thanks for checking out my stuff man.
Muchly appreciated!! LOL
Anxiety can kill - no joke. I need to have the mentality of
tear off the Band-Aid quick. LOL Just get it over with - then I'm good for a whole other year.
I'm going to have to check out your page in a bit:)
Again thanks for checking out my stuff man.
Muchly appreciated!! LOL
Re. Sun Beam
5th Aug 2022 6:35pm
Re: Re. Sun Beam
5th Aug 2022 6:38pm
Hi LilD:)
Hope you are having yourself a marvelous Friday!!
I'm sitting here on my day off enjoying a
nice cup of hazelnut coffee enjoying reading:)
Thank you so much for the RL and comment:)
Hope you are having yourself a marvelous Friday!!
I'm sitting here on my day off enjoying a
nice cup of hazelnut coffee enjoying reading:)
Thank you so much for the RL and comment:)
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
8th Aug 2022 00:13am
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Re: Re. Sun Beam
8th Aug 2022 00:20am
hahahah - that was just mean. LOL
I am looking at my arm right now and telling her you didn't mean it.
That's just how we joke:)
Yes - I will be making that appointment soon. Gotta take my younger son to do his physical first for track. Then it's mama's turn. LOL
Come what may!!
Have a great day amigo - hope you had a wonderful weekend:)
I am looking at my arm right now and telling her you didn't mean it.
That's just how we joke:)
Yes - I will be making that appointment soon. Gotta take my younger son to do his physical first for track. Then it's mama's turn. LOL
Come what may!!
Have a great day amigo - hope you had a wonderful weekend:)
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
8th Aug 2022 00:19am
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Re: Re. Sun Beam
8th Aug 2022 1:32am
Re. Sun Beam
18th Oct 2022 4:22pm
As somebody who has struggled bitterly with hypochondria, I feel your pain. Going to the doctor is necessary but never easy, let alone pleasant. You'll be fine! I'm sure writing this fine poem proved cathartic. Well done!
Mundus
Mundus
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Re: Re. Sun Beam
Hey Mun - is ok if I call you that?
I freak out every time. Talk way to fast and too much during the whole thing. LOL
Thanks for stopping by.
I freak out every time. Talk way to fast and too much during the whole thing. LOL
Thanks for stopping by.
Re: Re. Sun Beam
19th Oct 2022 3:38am
Hi! Sure, you can!
Sometimes I do that as well. Most of the time, though, I keep all my worries bottled up, though I usually admit I'm nervous when they take my blood pressure, because of my anxiety it ends up rising a bit LOL
Wish you the best!
Mundus
Sometimes I do that as well. Most of the time, though, I keep all my worries bottled up, though I usually admit I'm nervous when they take my blood pressure, because of my anxiety it ends up rising a bit LOL
Wish you the best!
Mundus
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