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HOW MUCH I CARE
HOW MUCH I CARE
Here I am feeling some kind of way about, the struggles that I have been fighting and trying to ignore. Through the process of my thoughts and heart. For example sometimes when I am alone, I still can feel your breath with silent whispers, softly breezing pass my ears. But yet I feel your soul spiritually reaching inside my body, as you are caressing my mind with the sounds of your sweet voice. As it creats silent whispers in motions, echoing the sounds of the seas crashing into the ROCK OF MY HEART. FOR I LIKE TO SHOW YOU HOW DEEPLY I APPRECIATE, THE LOVE OF SOMETHING SO BEAUTIFUL, AS I GIVE TO YOU HONESTLY and COMPLETELY.
Here I am feeling some kind of way about, the struggles that I have been fighting and trying to ignore. Through the process of my thoughts and heart. For example sometimes when I am alone, I still can feel your breath with silent whispers, softly breezing pass my ears. But yet I feel your soul spiritually reaching inside my body, as you are caressing my mind with the sounds of your sweet voice. As it creats silent whispers in motions, echoing the sounds of the seas crashing into the ROCK OF MY HEART. FOR I LIKE TO SHOW YOU HOW DEEPLY I APPRECIATE, THE LOVE OF SOMETHING SO BEAUTIFUL, AS I GIVE TO YOU HONESTLY and COMPLETELY.
Published 29th Jul 2022
Author's Note
Self reflection & analysis on my behaviors when I'm in relationship.
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29th Jul 2022 5:55am
Mono,
Here's a 🍔🥞 for that one. That was a super job upon that speak. For I like to show u how deeply I appreciate, the luv of something so beautiful. That's one hell of a line. 🌷🍑👁️🌆🛳️🛁🚿🌃🌌
Here's a 🍔🥞 for that one. That was a super job upon that speak. For I like to show u how deeply I appreciate, the luv of something so beautiful. That's one hell of a line. 🌷🍑👁️🌆🛳️🛁🚿🌃🌌
29th Jul 2022 7:17am
Thank you kindly. I am trying desperately to write better. For it to fow right, sound better, and definitely more mature. To me, I still sound so ELEMENTARY. Suggestions? 🥰❤💯
29th Jul 2022 10:56am
This sounds wierd, but, try breathing inhaling and exhaling as u type. It works for me.
29th Jul 2022 7:19pm
