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Write in me
And you say I am being too loud. That my screams will never be heard. You grab my legs pulling me towards you and then you rip off my panties. Taking them you place them in my mouth. And I stop screaming with a whimper. You say 'that's right bi***' you better listen. And you say I must be punished. I hear the crack of the whip but it does not hit me, not yet. This was a warning shot. So many more shots to come later. And I clench my teeth as I feel the burning traces on my back even before they happen. I know how well you write with the whip on my canvas. And you say you want to teach me. Perhaps it's because you say I am a bitch sometimes, perhaps it's for being too sensitive, perhaps it's just to hurt me... Whatever the reason, I love reading what you write on me. And I know you will write in me soon in hot flowing lines. I will shudder and shake, the pain is just unbearable. Not to have this pain is simply unbearable too. If you stopped writing I would surely die. So make a new chapter in me.
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There are so many ways to get inspired. ;)
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Re. Write in me
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20th Jul 2022 9:11pm
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Re: Re. Write in me
20th Jul 2022 9:26pm
Well damn SMS! Yes, I think that goes perfectly with my descriptions. lol
Quite the complimentary write you got going on there. Slutty look, oh yeah... But I just can't help it. :p I like when someone gets really hungry and that definitely helps move things a long as you well know. Femme fatale, be careful... that can be real dangerous. You might not make it out alive so bring your dominant side for sure. 'You're going to choke on my truth' sometimes you just have to feed that truth to someone else. :p 'As I penetrate deep into your psyche.' Hey, that's my job damnit but I like that a lot. :p Way to bring the pain. I love provoking thoughts... See what can happen. :p
Quite the complimentary write you got going on there. Slutty look, oh yeah... But I just can't help it. :p I like when someone gets really hungry and that definitely helps move things a long as you well know. Femme fatale, be careful... that can be real dangerous. You might not make it out alive so bring your dominant side for sure. 'You're going to choke on my truth' sometimes you just have to feed that truth to someone else. :p 'As I penetrate deep into your psyche.' Hey, that's my job damnit but I like that a lot. :p Way to bring the pain. I love provoking thoughts... See what can happen. :p
Re: Re. Write in me
20th Jul 2022 9:41pm
Hey there Adagio, I am really happy you thought it is a good write. ;) I like it but that doesn't mean anyone else would. :p I really appreciate you stopping by and sharing your thoughts with me.
Re. Write in me
20th Jul 2022 9:46pm
You look kinda innocent
That would be my first mistake
Never trust that instinct he thought.
The belt tells no lies.
Anyone can write sex but not many can write bdsm as wanting and wonton as you. This is your home office. I'm on my way over.
We've got a few things to discuss.
Take no prisoners kind of night work
BIG LEATHER LIKE
RL AWARD
That would be my first mistake
Never trust that instinct he thought.
The belt tells no lies.
Anyone can write sex but not many can write bdsm as wanting and wonton as you. This is your home office. I'm on my way over.
We've got a few things to discuss.
Take no prisoners kind of night work
BIG LEATHER LIKE
RL AWARD
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Re: Re. Write in me
20th Jul 2022 9:51pm
lol. Oh yeah! that's definitely a mistake. But I can look innocent, I can be innocent if you want. * bats eyelashes, doe eyed look * Why is it they always whip the innocent ones? Maybe that's why I look innocent. BDSM is definitely an inspired type of write for sure, but when you have that inspiration hopefully it can be great. ;) Oh boy, things to discuss, that sounds ominous. lol Gonna get tied up and... for sure from the sounds of it. Love BIG LEATHER LIKE and thanks so much for the RL too.
Re. Write in me
20th Jul 2022 10:01pm
A very interesting and powerful story yet it definitely reflects the mirror images of life as it comes with twistes and deepness into the depth of an sensual pleasure zone 👊🤗😉🙏
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Re: Re. Write in me
20th Jul 2022 10:48pm
Mirror images of life, I definitely see that too. And I love exploring the twists and deepness into the depth of an sensual pleasure zone. That's my zone for sure. I imagine if I were away too long things would get really dangerous. :p Thanks for visiting the sensual pleasure zone with me Stoney. I really appreciate you sharing your thoughts a lot.
Re: Re. Write in me
21st Jul 2022 2:06am
I appreciate your kindness and love for sharing your thoughts with story book of life's beautiful blessings 🙏✍👊🦋
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Re. Write in me
20th Jul 2022 10:03pm
You inspire many I'm sure, sending snippets of you out into the void
Great write gorgeous
Love and light
Ron x
Great write gorgeous
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. Write in me
20th Jul 2022 10:49pm
I always want to be an inspiration. I love inspiring all sorts of things. ;) Snippets into the void, I guess I am sending something into the void. I really hope the void likes it. I really love that you do Ron, thanks so much for sharing your thoughts with me. Sending so much love and light back at you...
Re. Write in me
20th Jul 2022 10:15pm
Patstries and pasties....
There's that excitement with a straw in your cup....until reality sets in and it's nothing like controlled pandemonium.
It all sounds rather chipper, and then there's the stifling sense that the ride will never be over.
You promise and promise, but nothing's for sale at any bargain.
This was what you thought you wanted.
There's that excitement with a straw in your cup....until reality sets in and it's nothing like controlled pandemonium.
It all sounds rather chipper, and then there's the stifling sense that the ride will never be over.
You promise and promise, but nothing's for sale at any bargain.
This was what you thought you wanted.
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Re: Re. Write in me
20th Jul 2022 10:50pm
I want a pastry now damnit RT. Something sweet and innocent like me. * cough * There is a lot to unpack there... don't let reality set in, just keep the excitement and pandemonium going; perhaps that's the purpose. The ride always ends at some point, but you can always ride again. I don't make promises in those moments that way you can't break them. :p Always thinking... What do I want?...
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20th Jul 2022 11:42pm
Re: Re. Write in me
20th Jul 2022 11:47pm
That's a complicated question. Not really one I would want to answer in a comment.
Re. Write in me
20th Jul 2022 10:56pm
This is what I call an Iconic write
Damn cute picture
Happening in all the right places
Come see me for a conjugal Visit
Padded walls
Screams ok
Free snacks and smacks
Damn cute picture
Happening in all the right places
Come see me for a conjugal Visit
Padded walls
Screams ok
Free snacks and smacks
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Re: Re. Write in me
20th Jul 2022 11:21pm
Iconic, haha I see what you did there. Aw, thanks - I really appreciate that. :) It's always good to have stuff happening in all the right places isn't it? :p Padded walls, screams, free snack and smacks. Been there, wait no I meant I don't know what you are talking about * trying for the innocent sane look now * Is it working? maybe not.
Re. Write in me
20th Jul 2022 11:50pm
Re: Re. Write in me
20th Jul 2022 11:57pm
I have been called a little arsonist. lol I guess I like setting things on fire so be careful asking me to set you on fire. :p Oh yes! I can be loud. But some sounds are always nice, at least for me. Thank you so much for stopping by and sharing your thoughts with me Francisco. I really appreciate it.
Re. Write in me
21st Jul 2022 1:06am
hello beautiful Kristina what naughty one you are
I am not equipped to write inside you
but I love the idea of watching your torture
of course that you permit unless your fantasy is for him to take you by force
then I would leave my proclivities private this makes me think of the Marquis de Sade
you are such a lovely minx to conjure such images 💕
I am not equipped to write inside you
but I love the idea of watching your torture
of course that you permit unless your fantasy is for him to take you by force
then I would leave my proclivities private this makes me think of the Marquis de Sade
you are such a lovely minx to conjure such images 💕
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Re: Re. Write in me
21st Jul 2022 2:57am
Oh yes! Definitely a naughty one, but I know you are too. ;)
There are always ways. Just saying... :p
Or directing the torture, I bet you would have all kinds of things in mind. ;)
So many fantasies... So many realities to be explored too.
Getting into them would flag this as extreme content for sure.
Marquis de Sade, perfect. I need to go read some of his.
I really love conjuring those images for you.
and 'lovely minx' I adore that.
I didn't feel like I was able to express my appreciation for your comment so I know how that feels too. ;)
There are always ways. Just saying... :p
Or directing the torture, I bet you would have all kinds of things in mind. ;)
So many fantasies... So many realities to be explored too.
Getting into them would flag this as extreme content for sure.
Marquis de Sade, perfect. I need to go read some of his.
I really love conjuring those images for you.
and 'lovely minx' I adore that.
I didn't feel like I was able to express my appreciation for your comment so I know how that feels too. ;)
Re. Write in me
Hi Kristina:)
I love the comparison you did with this. The hot flowing lines is awesome!!!
The whole poem is fire and I enjoyed how you used with the whip to accentuate this.
I can feel the anticipation you have for him to start writing on you - in you - all of it!! hahaha
Too hot amiga!!
You rock at this!!!
Ooohhh ooohh!!!!!
Almost forgot - cute pic!!
Especially the booty. hehehe
You are tempting me to put my booty as
my next avatar. LOL (totally serious btw)
I love the comparison you did with this. The hot flowing lines is awesome!!!
The whole poem is fire and I enjoyed how you used with the whip to accentuate this.
I can feel the anticipation you have for him to start writing on you - in you - all of it!! hahaha
Too hot amiga!!
You rock at this!!!
Ooohhh ooohh!!!!!
Almost forgot - cute pic!!
Especially the booty. hehehe
You are tempting me to put my booty as
my next avatar. LOL (totally serious btw)
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Re: Re. Write in me
21st Jul 2022 2:59am
Hell yeah! I was hoping some women would feel this with me. :)
I never know when I am being a "troublemaker" lol
You know starting fires and stuff like that. :p
I am sure there have been many hot flowing lines written about your booty.
Yeah, don't worry I am going to stop there. lol
Writing with a whip is definitely a skill.
Oh the anticipation just drives me crazy...
I need to be written on, in and all of it often. :p
'You rock at this!!!' Absolutely adore that.
I think you are trying to shut me up now,
by making me speechless. :p
Haha...
Love it. You always make me smile.
You are just getting everyone excited now Adelphina.
I definitely am, let's see that booty Chica.
You can't back out now. lol
I never know when I am being a "troublemaker" lol
You know starting fires and stuff like that. :p
I am sure there have been many hot flowing lines written about your booty.
Yeah, don't worry I am going to stop there. lol
Writing with a whip is definitely a skill.
Oh the anticipation just drives me crazy...
I need to be written on, in and all of it often. :p
'You rock at this!!!' Absolutely adore that.
I think you are trying to shut me up now,
by making me speechless. :p
Haha...
Love it. You always make me smile.
You are just getting everyone excited now Adelphina.
I definitely am, let's see that booty Chica.
You can't back out now. lol
Re: Re. Write in me
21st Jul 2022 3:06am
Pssst (my imitation of styx) LOL
You were supposed to ignore that last add on.
Like read over it and on to the next poem!!!
hahahaha
Shit!!!!- you just called me out on National DUP Network.
Okay I will see which DUP friendly booty to show.
I have a few. hahahaha
You were supposed to ignore that last add on.
Like read over it and on to the next poem!!!
hahahaha
Shit!!!!- you just called me out on National DUP Network.
Okay I will see which DUP friendly booty to show.
I have a few. hahahaha
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Re: Re. Write in me
21st Jul 2022 2:28pm
Haha, you know me better than that. Did you really think I would let that go. lol
But you don't have too if don't want, you just smile and anyone would forgive you for anything I think. :p Keep smiling.
But you don't have too if don't want, you just smile and anyone would forgive you for anything I think. :p Keep smiling.
Re. Write in me
21st Jul 2022 5:23am
Such an ingenious metaphor Kristina... :p
You have such a glorious aptitude for shaping things...
In your own image... :)
This is real cool... I could feel the playfulness and joy in creation...
You have such a glorious aptitude for shaping things...
In your own image... :)
This is real cool... I could feel the playfulness and joy in creation...
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Re: Re. Write in me
21st Jul 2022 2:26pm
Hey Cipher, I love that you thought the metaphor were ingenious. I know how complex your metaphors can be so that makes me happy. Glorious aptitude for shaping things in my image is a huge compliment to me, thank you. Real cool is good too. I am glad you could feel the playfulness and joy, that it was able to show through among the other intensities involved. Thank you so much for stopping by and sharing your thoughts with me. I really like what you had to say a lot.
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Thank u for this inspiration. Your words were vividly purely eye catching and also wholesome from one line to the next line. Keep keeping me interested!🏙️🛳️🛁💝🚿💋💚!
Because Kristina, that is on awesome write about thee wanting a write within thee.
Because Kristina, that is on awesome write about thee wanting a write within thee.
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Re: Re. Write in me
21st Jul 2022 1:58pm
I love to inspire you Birchel. :) And catching your eye too, I am very wholesome. so I love that you felt that line to line. I hope I can keep you interested because that's a great feeling. Writing inside, and on too, is definitely the best writing for me. I definitely need that often. But I know you understand what I am talking about. Thanks so much for stopping in and giving me your thoughts. I love that. :)
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21st Jul 2022 3:58pm
Re: Re. Write in me
21st Jul 2022 1:58pm
Hey word_circus, I really like that name. Really happy I could give you something sexy to read. I think it's sexy but I think differently from most so sometimes it's hard to know how some things will be viewed. ;) So thank you so much for stopping by and sharing your thoughts with me. I really appreciate it. :)
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Re: Re. Write in me
21st Jul 2022 1:59pm
I have tons of passion Danny. ;) There have been different writers over time but possibly it could be dedicated to a past, present, or future writer. Thinking holistically about how that writing ripples through the body sometimes making me shake and shudder, bite and claw, and... Well I think I will have to stop there. :p I love being written in and on I guess is what I am saying. lol Thank you so much for visiting me and giving me your thoughts. I really appreciate it.
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Re. Write in me
21st Jul 2022 4:51pm
phantasies of love and lust
tinged with blood
caressing a lover's pain
I invoke the demons of my mind
reciting incantations in rhyme
the pulsing of my blood
pounding in my veins
becomes the beating heart of the sun..... Something I'm working on. Love and lust witch.
tinged with blood
caressing a lover's pain
I invoke the demons of my mind
reciting incantations in rhyme
the pulsing of my blood
pounding in my veins
becomes the beating heart of the sun..... Something I'm working on. Love and lust witch.
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Re: Re. Write in me
21st Jul 2022 5:55pm
phantasies becoming reality
through the doorway of pain
our demons never knock
pulsing blood filling me
deep within my body
incantations vibrate
while you pound my body
I am the eclipse of your sun
Casting spells of love and lust...
A young witch calls to the darkness always
It fills her like nothing else can
through the doorway of pain
our demons never knock
pulsing blood filling me
deep within my body
incantations vibrate
while you pound my body
I am the eclipse of your sun
Casting spells of love and lust...
A young witch calls to the darkness always
It fills her like nothing else can
Re. Write in me
21st Jul 2022 6:18pm
Again with the whip! Pain heads my way, I cross the street. I like the clever association of the whip as a writing instrument. I find thid s passage profoundly identifiable,
"pain is just unbearable. Not to have this pain is simply unbearable too."
Brava, Goddess BD❣
"pain is just unbearable. Not to have this pain is simply unbearable too."
Brava, Goddess BD❣
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Re: Re. Write in me
21st Jul 2022 8:25pm
So many ways to write... ;) A whip, rope, cuffs, ice, wax, well you get the point. lol Yes, I have an interesting relationship with pain for sure. One thing is for sure it's an intense feeling or sensation. You always feel it, and in some instances it is it's own type of remedy. Thank you so much for stopping by and sharing your thoughts with me GW. I really appreciate it.
Re: Re. Write in me
21st Jul 2022 8:21pm
I love things that penetrate deep so that sounds perfect to me. My words always do something I suppose, perhaps something weird. lol Thanks for stopping by and swimming in the depth with me, I really appreciate you sharing your thoughts with me Tim. ;)
Re. Write in me
21st Jul 2022 9:30pm
The pain of being branded and subdued, then the pleasure of being owned and taught to be ridden.
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Re: Re. Write in me
21st Jul 2022 9:37pm
Branded and subdued is definitely and interesting dynamic. The pleasure of being owned too, I am sure both people will teach other quite a bit. I know for me I like assuming different roles, variety is the spice of life. If you want me to give you pain I can do that too. ;) Thanks for stopping by and sharing your thoughts with me Leo. I really appreciate it.
Re. Write in me
22nd Jul 2022 2:36am
A mirror. A countertop.... A dare in writing.
And at the end, I'm keeping that hat as a trophy! Lol.
And at the end, I'm keeping that hat as a trophy! Lol.
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Re: Re. Write in me
22nd Jul 2022 2:46am
Yeah a countertop, a mirror, a floor, a bed, anywhere, anytime. I love that you saw the dare... I am always causing trouble, daring people to do things that they shouldn't. Or me in places I shouldn't be done. lol * cough * Hey now, you are going to get hurt talking like that. You aren't getting my hat damnit. :p
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Re: Re. Write in me
22nd Jul 2022 7:57pm
You really said a lot there PW. I love that you followed the story and respected the message. Art can me made in so many ways, writing, painting, drawing, touching, sucking, clawing, biting, and ... well so many ways... ;) I love when the reader feels included, I like including you in my passion. That makes writing worthwhile. Thanks so much for stopping by and sharing your thoughts with me.
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Re: Re. Write in me
22nd Jul 2022 8:15pm
Well maybe do it dispassionately first and then passionately next. ;) But I do love hearing the literary merit from someone who is experienced with such things so thank you for that. I like when someone can share in my mind. Lava lamps are cool. Hopefully you liked the other parts too. :p
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Re. Write in me
29th Jul 2022 5:36pm
Re: Re. Write in me
29th Jul 2022 5:53pm
Oh yes! there are so many ways to write. I know a text message can get me really worked up. But I suppose most things can. lol Definitely want to see what's on the next page. ;) Writing something more and more steamy with each new one. I love it when writing gets me worked up. Writing out thoughts can really do that. Thanks so much for stopping by to see me kink and sharing your thoughts. I really appreciate it.
Re. Write in me
We can hear the scribbling of pens and clicking of keyboards writing all throughout. Hot and intense through and through.
Amazing spill K
Amazing spill K
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Re: Re. Write in me
1st Aug 2022 1:54am
Haha, there are so many ways to write. But writing in and on someone, now that's writing I am always ready for. Hot and intense, like me. :p Really glad you liked this one, I know it's different but I suppose you never know what you will get with me...
:p I love giving you an amazing spill. Thanks so much for visiting me and sharing your thoughts Wally. They are always wonderful to hear.
:p I love giving you an amazing spill. Thanks so much for visiting me and sharing your thoughts Wally. They are always wonderful to hear.
Re. Write in me
11th Aug 2022 1:38pm
You give tenderness to the cruelty of the whip… some woman like chocolates . I see you have a taste for something else . What a rare talent indeed.
Edgy and hot write
~NE~
Edgy and hot write
~NE~
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Re: Re. Write in me
11th Aug 2022 3:55pm
But I like chocolates too. :p Dark chocolate with very low sugar, always doing things in the extreme. ;) I love that you see the tenderness that exists in the cruelty of the whip. It's not for everyone I know but I suppose if you suffer enough then physical pain takes on a new meaning. One that not everyone understands but intense physical sensations can get you out of your mind where you can just be in your body. Everything else melts away. 'a rare talent indeed', wow thank you so much for the incredible compliment NE. I love edgy and hot... and being edgy and hot. ;) Thanks for stopping in and sharing your thoughts with me. I love that.
Re. Write in me
12th Aug 2022 8:41pm
You should see my handwriting.
Better yet, maybe you shouldn't.
Totally illegible
I'll do another kind of writing on you.
That will be loud and clear
No misunderstandings
Grass fed, organic, no hormones added leather
You've got enough of your own hormones rocking
Majestic underground write
You have spoken
Better yet, maybe you shouldn't.
Totally illegible
I'll do another kind of writing on you.
That will be loud and clear
No misunderstandings
Grass fed, organic, no hormones added leather
You've got enough of your own hormones rocking
Majestic underground write
You have spoken
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Re: Re. Write in me
12th Aug 2022 9:44pm
I like all kinds of handwriting, keeps things interesting. Calligraphy, typing, stroking, cursive, block lettering, kissing, whips, and whatever else imaginable. Everything write's something. May as well be me. ;) I am sure it would be loud. lol I don't misunderstand, I am very good at understanding everything. Leather speaks it's own language. So many damn hormones... Rocking all the time. Thanks for coming by to share in them.
'Majestic underground write' Always writing the underground stuff. ;) Either here or xinaskirt. :p
'Majestic underground write' Always writing the underground stuff. ;) Either here or xinaskirt. :p
Re. Write in me
15th Aug 2022 8:57pm
I'm afraid of the calmness of your pussy..!
As if it would vibrate and swell if I touched it.
As if it would throb if I wet it with my tongue.
If I lick it, it's like your waters of pleasure will flow.
If I sting it, it's like it's going to strangle my dick!
As if it would vibrate and swell if I touched it.
As if it would throb if I wet it with my tongue.
If I lick it, it's like your waters of pleasure will flow.
If I sting it, it's like it's going to strangle my dick!
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Re: Re. Write in me
23rd Aug 2022 2:44pm
Hey there Hard... Ah, not sure there is a calmness there.
So sorry for the late reply, I missed this somehow.
But oh yes! vibrates and swells if touched. ;)
I am sure it would, already wet in anticipation.
The waters of pleasure would stream...
To ride those rapids is an experience.
Definitely going to strangle your dick...
Always so tight, I need something to stretch me.
As I grasp you tight... While you write in me. ;)
So sorry for the late reply, I missed this somehow.
But oh yes! vibrates and swells if touched. ;)
I am sure it would, already wet in anticipation.
The waters of pleasure would stream...
To ride those rapids is an experience.
Definitely going to strangle your dick...
Always so tight, I need something to stretch me.
As I grasp you tight... While you write in me. ;)