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Little gym rat... Part 4 - I continue to take it deeper (revised)

I continue to take it deeper so that it tickles my throat and I almost cough, so I pull back along the shaft with my tongue swirling over every inch as it goes. I can still feel his hesitation, the conflict about allowing me to take him in my mouth. My tongue flicking and rubbing the tip, tasting a little eagerness coming out on my tongue. Oh yes! This cock needs a hole, any hole to demonstrate its power in. And I am so willing to be that in every way, so horny for that display of power in me. My mind is consumed with only one thing, stroking this cock in my hand with my tongue, my lips, my throat, and everything else too. I stroke the base while sill concentrating on the tip. He grabs my hair, interweaving fingers and pulling hard as it sends an avalanche of sensation between my legs. I love this training; I need to feel firm hands to challenge me. I grab myself even deeper inserting a couple of more fingers to stop the dam from breaching. I grasp his buttocks with the other not letting myself be pushed away. It’s so hot in my mouth and I imagine what that will feel like truly inside me. I know I am going to find out. I continue taking him deep in my throat, back and forth along the shaft. Moving downward sucking deeply like this is the last Gelato on earth on the hottest day in Rome and applying pressure with my lips. It feels meditative stroking him up and down with my mouth, feeling that building orgasm rippling in my mouth so eager to come. And as much as I want to control him, to make him spill out inside my mouth I don’t want that just yet. So I take him out of my mouth watching the movements his cock is making with a life of its own. It’s definitely right at the precipice of climax.
 
I take one of his testicles in my mouth and suck on it diverting the attention from that eager cock. I want to feel that sperm that is brewing just for me. There is so much I can tell… This is going to fill my tight pussy for sure as long as I continue to exert my innocent control to get what I want, what I need. Taking the other testicle in my mouth to keep a balance. It’s so full of tastes that my mouth craves. I am stroking again, keeping that eager throbbing on my fingers; his and mine. Still gazing up, he is looking down on me with intense pleasure in his eyes, half closed. I continue and with each new contraction he makes in my mouth I want to feel that cum streaming down my throat. My own orgasm is strongly building but I hold it back, I want that to happen at the same time. He tries to regain control and pushes me away as I hold on tight. ‘Stop’ he says but I won’t stop. His cock is pulsating so much, inflated even more filling every bit of my mouth and throat. I can feel the spasms that have started and I just hang on tighter, closing my eyes as if to shield them from what’s coming. He shudders as the first thin fluid seeps out onto my tongue. It’s so tasty, I just swirl it around his cock lubricating it a bit more. He sighs grasping my hair as I pull him all the way in holding his testicles. I feel him start to burst in my mouth, now pulling me tight against him while a stream hits my throat sliding down as I try not to gag and swallow. Another hot stream hits as I stroke my clit and I start to shake letting myself go. It’s like he is running through me and out of me below onto my fingers inside me. He is holding my head tight still which is good because I am not sure I could hang on otherwise, I might fall back. My eyes rolling back as his cum runs onto my lips and I smear it all over him, some dropping on my perky breasts. I want him to lick them for me.
Written by xinaskirt
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Author's Note
I felt like Part 4 was missing something, so I have updated and revised it. I hope this more accurately reflects my thoughts and will be a better read for you. Thanks for reading and I really appreciate any feedback. X

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