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Affirm(ative)
Filled with acceptance
leaving behind dissonance
a new love.....is born
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Yesterday's ashes
become lessons hard learned
wise are the willing
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Forgiveness heals deep
yet scars are indelible
keeping us honest
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Found pride is magic
which I'll never feel bad for
... and neither will God
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Re. Soul searching senryś
19th Jul 2022 00:35am
Dear, Blue❣
Thank yu for your serene, wonerful words of wisdom.
Bravissima!🐻💞🐰
Thank yu for your serene, wonerful words of wisdom.
Bravissima!🐻💞🐰
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Re: Re. Soul searching senryś
Re. Affirm(ative)
19th Jul 2022 00:57am
Re: Re. Affirm(ative)
19th Jul 2022 1:44am
You're extremely talented in your own beautiful way, dear Knight.
Thank you for stopping by and for being in my corner.
I am so fortunate!
🌹 - 💙 - ⚔️
B
Thank you for stopping by and for being in my corner.
I am so fortunate!
🌹 - 💙 - ⚔️
B
Re. Affirm(ative)
19th Jul 2022 1:17am
Blue velvet,
This is great advice in a poetic form. I even read this backwards and found it also greater of understanding. Great write also.
This is great advice in a poetic form. I even read this backwards and found it also greater of understanding. Great write also.
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Re: Re. Affirm(ative)
19th Jul 2022 1:48am
Thanks for the lovely comments and the generous list add!.... and yes, backwards or forwards the affirmations work either way.... keen observation, my friend!
It's always a pleasure to see you 🦋
🌹 - 💙
B
It's always a pleasure to see you 🦋
🌹 - 💙
B
Re: Re. Affirm(ative)
19th Jul 2022 2:08am
U too as well thank u. And, u are welcome ah muchly from the💖 heart of me. Thy writings are the dear bliss of the joy I encounter. 🌷🍑💋💪🌷🍑💋💃🍇♥️🍓👍😁🍭.
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Re. Affirm(ative)
19th Jul 2022 2:10am
Dear BV,
What a lovely little daily prayer poem. I can read one each day and reaffirm a positive thought process. I really enjoyed this because appreciating myself is such a chore. Sweet affirmations like these say its okay to do so.
Beautiful write. H🌷
What a lovely little daily prayer poem. I can read one each day and reaffirm a positive thought process. I really enjoyed this because appreciating myself is such a chore. Sweet affirmations like these say its okay to do so.
Beautiful write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Affirm(ative)
19th Jul 2022 3:48am
Hey there, lovely lady
I used to think that affirmations were a bunch of bs but I've made a total 180 on that frame of thought within the last few months or so. I find real empowerment and a sense of sticktoitiveness from little thoughts or ideas that I find really resonate and help me to uplift myself, which I too often find difficult to do.... and maintain.
I'm truly thankful you found something that you enjoyed here as well.... it means so much to me.
Take care of yourself, H
Love and well wishes sent your way ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
I used to think that affirmations were a bunch of bs but I've made a total 180 on that frame of thought within the last few months or so. I find real empowerment and a sense of sticktoitiveness from little thoughts or ideas that I find really resonate and help me to uplift myself, which I too often find difficult to do.... and maintain.
I'm truly thankful you found something that you enjoyed here as well.... it means so much to me.
Take care of yourself, H
Love and well wishes sent your way ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Affirm(ative)
19th Jul 2022 2:18am
You are wisdom at your young age my sweet lady. Keep on writing you beautiful strong smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. Affirm(ative)
19th Jul 2022 3:13am
lol.... You're always full of positivity, Francisco! I adore that and I definitely applaud your wonderful mindset. In fact it's hard to imagine what it's like not to have your input and sense of charm here with me, because you're a such faithful true and deeply appreciated reader!
I'm grateful!
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I'm grateful!
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Re: Re. Affirm(ative)
19th Jul 2022 3:53am
I am your sexy charmer, who will try to charm your panties/thong off you, LOL.
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Re: Re. Affirm(ative)
19th Jul 2022 5:58am
hahaha... Ohh you just couldn't resist!!... lmao.
I'll say this for you Francisco, you are one persistent poet... and yes yes... Sexy charmer, too!
🌹 - x
I'll say this for you Francisco, you are one persistent poet... and yes yes... Sexy charmer, too!
🌹 - x
Re: Re. Affirm(ative)
19th Jul 2022 7:41am
I couldn't resist because you are one hot strong smart beautiful sexy ass woman who deserves to be happy.
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Re. Affirm(ative)
19th Jul 2022 2:40am
I like how you have intricately woven your thoughts on this piece of work and how you created the process of learning wisdom and knowledge through your life as you become aware of your thoughts that understand the importance of conscious thinking 🙏👊🤗🦋
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Re: Re. Affirm(ative)
19th Jul 2022 3:22am
Hey there, Stoney ;)
It's a bit of influence from others like yourself and your shaman's essence and a lot of self introspective work, practice and proper mindset that have afforded me the opportunity to be a little enlightened.... enough so, to pen these thoughts.
I'm so delighted you found enjoyment and I'm entirely grateful for the lovely list add, the kind words and all your wonderful support
Much love and much respect, my dear shaman
🌹 - 💙
B
It's a bit of influence from others like yourself and your shaman's essence and a lot of self introspective work, practice and proper mindset that have afforded me the opportunity to be a little enlightened.... enough so, to pen these thoughts.
I'm so delighted you found enjoyment and I'm entirely grateful for the lovely list add, the kind words and all your wonderful support
Much love and much respect, my dear shaman
🌹 - 💙
B
Re: Re. Affirm(ative)
19th Jul 2022 3:32pm
Re. Affirm(ative)
19th Jul 2022 3:24am
Re: Re. Affirm(ative)
So far for me, that's been one of the sparse few good things about getting older!!!.. lol... I definitely agree with you,Robert.... undoubtedly!!
Thanks for that perspective and for stopping by.
🌹 - 💙
x
Thanks for that perspective and for stopping by.
🌹 - 💙
x
Re. Affirm(ative)
19th Jul 2022 3:54am
Re: Re. Affirm(ative)
You're a killer, kind and cool soul, my friend
Thanks for stopping by to get a little 'affirmation on' .... hahaha..
Glad you enjoyed.
I initially had a lame title, then this one just serendipitously popped into my head, so thanks for the nod, I dig it too!!
Ty Ty, my dear
🌹 - 💙
(when you can, if you can listen to the spoken word version of my poem Telltale and tell me what you think, if you feel something isn't working... etc, I'd just very much appreciate your take, particularly. No rush or if you're too busy, just whenever... a thousand thank yous in advance! )
꒒ ০ ⌵ ୧
(ㅅ“ ˘ ')♡
Thanks for stopping by to get a little 'affirmation on' .... hahaha..
Glad you enjoyed.
I initially had a lame title, then this one just serendipitously popped into my head, so thanks for the nod, I dig it too!!
Ty Ty, my dear
🌹 - 💙
(when you can, if you can listen to the spoken word version of my poem Telltale and tell me what you think, if you feel something isn't working... etc, I'd just very much appreciate your take, particularly. No rush or if you're too busy, just whenever... a thousand thank yous in advance! )
꒒ ০ ⌵ ୧
(ㅅ“ ˘ ')♡
Re. Affirm(ative)
19th Jul 2022 8:54am
The senyru count is spot on and the string has classic truths. I think it deserves a WOW
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Re: Re. Affirm(ative)
19th Jul 2022 9:36am
Slip!!!
Hey there, my friend :)
I love love love the "Wow" thank you!!
I'm all smiles to see you 🦋
I'm thrilled you enjoyed the flow and the truths found within.... there's something about that little acknowledged sentiment that stays with you!
It's always a pleasure to have you visit, I hope you're enjoying your summer.
Be well and be safe out there,
🌹-B
Hey there, my friend :)
I love love love the "Wow" thank you!!
I'm all smiles to see you 🦋
I'm thrilled you enjoyed the flow and the truths found within.... there's something about that little acknowledged sentiment that stays with you!
It's always a pleasure to have you visit, I hope you're enjoying your summer.
Be well and be safe out there,
🌹-B
Re. Affirm(ative)
19th Jul 2022 5:54pm
Creating a dossier on the new love. Still working out the details on what has transpired.
Be well my lovely nemesis. Cheers to our next "interrogation!"
xxoo
-0088
Be well my lovely nemesis. Cheers to our next "interrogation!"
xxoo
-0088
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Re: Re. Affirm(ative)
There's no new love.... only my deep infatuation with special agents and (certain) investigators!
I await with bated breath, my lovely DaVinci!!
Love seeing you 🦋
x
(*・‿・)ノ⌒*:・゚✧
I await with bated breath, my lovely DaVinci!!
Love seeing you 🦋
x
(*・‿・)ノ⌒*:・゚✧
Anonymous
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20th Jul 2022 1:03am
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Re: Re. Affirm(ative)
20th Jul 2022 6:08pm
Thanks for checking out my little senryś string of affirming thoughts. I very much appreciate the feedback.
It might sound silly to some but I've discovered that it's definitely helpful in trying to change thought patterns; allowing growth to take hold.
Best,
🌹 B
It might sound silly to some but I've discovered that it's definitely helpful in trying to change thought patterns; allowing growth to take hold.
Best,
🌹 B
Re. Affirm(ative)
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20th Jul 2022 5:33am
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Re: Re. Affirm(ative)
20th Jul 2022 6:24pm
Dear S,
It's within the power of words that people like you and I already find such relief of expression within our poetic creations. To me, it only makes sense, (despite how silly it feels initially.. lol) that a little written resonate affirmation can go a long way in course correcting a way of thinking, which hopefully can steer one's self towards a better path to travel....
Your kind words of feedback and support are only made true because of those around me who I too, gather inspiration from... I guess we're all just vampiricly taking and giving, that way... hahaha. I know wouldn't trade that exchange for anything. It's made me a much better and more empathic person and writer in general!
Much thanks and enormous appreciation, my lovely friend.
Seeing you always betters my day.
🌹💙 💙
s/s
(ㅅ“ ˘ `)♡
It's within the power of words that people like you and I already find such relief of expression within our poetic creations. To me, it only makes sense, (despite how silly it feels initially.. lol) that a little written resonate affirmation can go a long way in course correcting a way of thinking, which hopefully can steer one's self towards a better path to travel....
Your kind words of feedback and support are only made true because of those around me who I too, gather inspiration from... I guess we're all just vampiricly taking and giving, that way... hahaha. I know wouldn't trade that exchange for anything. It's made me a much better and more empathic person and writer in general!
Much thanks and enormous appreciation, my lovely friend.
Seeing you always betters my day.
🌹💙 💙
s/s
(ㅅ“ ˘ `)♡
Re. Affirm(ative)
20th Jul 2022 6:26am
Hoi hoi
If you put on the news, youll see that God has more than enough shit to deal with.
So, (... and neither will God) my guess is that he or she will be delighted with all kinds of love and attraction.
One of the best light verse writers in the Netherlands once called her entire show Lachen mag van God. Which roughly translates into God permits laughter.
I think that is a useful compass to sail by.
Thank you for posting Affirm. A truly great piece of work.
Kind regards, Gus
If you put on the news, youll see that God has more than enough shit to deal with.
So, (... and neither will God) my guess is that he or she will be delighted with all kinds of love and attraction.
One of the best light verse writers in the Netherlands once called her entire show Lachen mag van God. Which roughly translates into God permits laughter.
I think that is a useful compass to sail by.
Thank you for posting Affirm. A truly great piece of work.
Kind regards, Gus
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Re: Re. Affirm(ative)
20th Jul 2022 6:48pm
Hey Johnny!
I think that's kind of the point of that last line about God....That an entity like that isn't concerned about my decisions or self value, like pride... it's all up to myself, as it should be.
Were where my thoughts sort of traveled.
I like that... 'God permits laughter' it's a wonderful thought and terrific way to organize your beliefs, if practiced.
I deeply appreciate you taking the time to visit and for participating in our wonderful thought exchanges! It truly make me value you and DU even more, because it's so cool and fulfilling to be able have such a great open process in which to get other perspectives that I hold dear.
It's a sincere pleasure ✨
Much love and music sent your way...
🌹 - B
(✿╹◡╹)ノ☆.。₀:*゚✲゚*:₀。/♫*Ø*.øø♪
PS-i just saw you posted something earlier that I plan on checking out .... looking forward to it ;)
I think that's kind of the point of that last line about God....That an entity like that isn't concerned about my decisions or self value, like pride... it's all up to myself, as it should be.
Were where my thoughts sort of traveled.
I like that... 'God permits laughter' it's a wonderful thought and terrific way to organize your beliefs, if practiced.
I deeply appreciate you taking the time to visit and for participating in our wonderful thought exchanges! It truly make me value you and DU even more, because it's so cool and fulfilling to be able have such a great open process in which to get other perspectives that I hold dear.
It's a sincere pleasure ✨
Much love and music sent your way...
🌹 - B
(✿╹◡╹)ノ☆.。₀:*゚✲゚*:₀。/♫*Ø*.øø♪
PS-i just saw you posted something earlier that I plan on checking out .... looking forward to it ;)
Re: Re. Affirm(ative)
28th Jul 2022 11:12pm
Re. Affirm(ative)
29th Jul 2022 7:13am
Some inspiring words, friend 😁 everyday is a battle and we have to remind ourselves our worth.
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Re: Re. Affirm(ative)
29th Jul 2022 7:29am
Hey, DC
Thanks for the visit
You said a mouthful, my friend.
It really does help to affirm and remind yourself, especially when you're feeling like you're teetering on a dark cusp from needless pain and life pressures...
I deeply appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts with me; I respect and cherish hearing your particular POV, especially...
I dig that straight talk... always.
Nice seeing you 🦋
🌹 - B
Thanks for the visit
You said a mouthful, my friend.
It really does help to affirm and remind yourself, especially when you're feeling like you're teetering on a dark cusp from needless pain and life pressures...
I deeply appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts with me; I respect and cherish hearing your particular POV, especially...
I dig that straight talk... always.
Nice seeing you 🦋
🌹 - B
Re. Affirm(ative)
29th Jul 2022 7:01pm
Re: Re. Affirm(ative)
29th Jul 2022 10:20pm
Hey there, L
It's a true thrill to find that a line or two resonates and works for someone, I'm grateful for your thoughtfulness in highlighting that for me... it means a lot, as I value your opinion.
Much thanks and appreciation for the generous RL add, your lovely visit and the inspiration you instill.
Always a sheer pleasure ✨
🌹 - B
It's a true thrill to find that a line or two resonates and works for someone, I'm grateful for your thoughtfulness in highlighting that for me... it means a lot, as I value your opinion.
Much thanks and appreciation for the generous RL add, your lovely visit and the inspiration you instill.
Always a sheer pleasure ✨
🌹 - B
Re. Affirm(ative)
Anonymous
- Edited 30th Jul 2022 3:52am
30th Jul 2022 3:51am
as we should never feel bad for nor apologize, brilliant work
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Re: Re. Affirm(ative)
It's taken me a while to get to that place of healthy agreement, sinisterspital! Which I wholeheartedly am in. No one should make apologies for who and what they are!! Self love and affirming that, is such a valuable, healthy and cool way to remind one's self...
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me, it's so meaningful and deeply appreciated.
🌹 - 💙
B
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me, it's so meaningful and deeply appreciated.
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Affirm(ative)
30th Jul 2022 7:50am
Re. Affirm(ative)
31st Jul 2022 10:02pm
Wonderful collection of senryus perfectly linking together, flowing very nicely.
Great stuff Blue
Great stuff Blue
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Re. Affirm(ative)
Anonymous
5th Aug 2022 6:35am
The magic of you dances in these words
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Re. Affirm(ative)
8th Aug 2022 6:00am
Wow I love how put this group of senryu together and form a great message... amazing work indeed! :)
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Re: Re. Affirm(ative)
8th Aug 2022 6:04am
Much obliged!
I'm all smiles that you came across this one and felt it's affirming message
Thanks for the lovely sentiments and for taking the time.... I sincerely wish you the best in your week ahead.
-`ღ“-
I'm all smiles that you came across this one and felt it's affirming message
Thanks for the lovely sentiments and for taking the time.... I sincerely wish you the best in your week ahead.
-`ღ“-
Re. Affirm(ative)
10th Aug 2022 4:19am
Re. Affirm(ative)
10th Aug 2022 4:45am
this is so beautiful lovely Blue
you touch me the way only a woman like you can with your gorgeous soul
I'm a hardened person you remind me how beautiful the softness of a woman can be 💕
great write...
you touch me the way only a woman like you can with your gorgeous soul
I'm a hardened person you remind me how beautiful the softness of a woman can be 💕
great write...
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Re. Affirm(ative)
27th Aug 2022 9:33pm
God loves your self-affirmations my darling. In fact, she encourages them. This is spiritually attuned to the cosmic healer. There is true self-esteem here of the noblest kind. And I could bask in your poetic wisdom like an otter in the sun. As your emotional river unfolds through canyons of beauty I am most honored to be part of your truth as your reader.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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