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Immortality
The idea of being immortal
is that of a fantasy.
A thing people have longed for since the beginning.
You would get to live out your wildest dreams.
Without the fear of death.
And see what becomes of the world and its people.
But really what is good about being immortal?
Of living eternally.
You watch your loved ones fall
while you stand thriving.
You age with the earth itself.
Without aging at all.
is that of a fantasy.
A thing people have longed for since the beginning.
You would get to live out your wildest dreams.
Without the fear of death.
And see what becomes of the world and its people.
But really what is good about being immortal?
Of living eternally.
You watch your loved ones fall
while you stand thriving.
You age with the earth itself.
Without aging at all.
Published 15th Jul 2022
Author's Note
I did write one like this a while ago. But i honestly didn't entirely liked how I did it. So i decided to rewrite it. This probably isn't that great since I basically wrote this really late. Mainly because I thought of it at about 2 in the morning. And i didn't really want to forget about it.
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16th Jul 2022 6:40pm
