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feelings VS friendship
always the listener
never any judgement
im a little person
not big enough to carry all this weight
all your secrets are heavy
they over flow my thoughts
why did you pick me
to hear all your dirty shit
everyone always seems to think
my shoulders are strong
look again.....
never any judgement
im a little person
not big enough to carry all this weight
all your secrets are heavy
they over flow my thoughts
why did you pick me
to hear all your dirty shit
everyone always seems to think
my shoulders are strong
look again.....
Author's Note
always the listener.....
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Re. feelings VS friendship
14th Jul 2022 6:51am
Ever so profound...
I believe that a lady should be treated like a lady...
I don't care if that is antiquated...
I know interpersonal relationships can be... Complicated.
From my perspective... I believe in purpose.
Although the purposes may not necessarily align... The intent is there.
Intent... Which can also be... Complex...
But we love it... Do we not.?.
From my perspective... If a lady determines to be your friend...
This is a treasure to be treasured...
Which an act of Individuality... Of course...
I think I have both... Evolved and not evolved in my thinking...
It is... Complicated... :p
Excuse the cryptic nature of this comment...
I think this Poem is quite beautiful...
I believe that a lady should be treated like a lady...
I don't care if that is antiquated...
I know interpersonal relationships can be... Complicated.
From my perspective... I believe in purpose.
Although the purposes may not necessarily align... The intent is there.
Intent... Which can also be... Complex...
But we love it... Do we not.?.
From my perspective... If a lady determines to be your friend...
This is a treasure to be treasured...
Which an act of Individuality... Of course...
I think I have both... Evolved and not evolved in my thinking...
It is... Complicated... :p
Excuse the cryptic nature of this comment...
I think this Poem is quite beautiful...
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Re: Re. feelings VS friendship
Why thank you, love. Great to see you! Relationships are forever growin, dyin, then rebirthing. This one was about a friend. shes an ass. but i love her, ugh.
Re. feelings VS friendship
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14th Jul 2022 9:20am
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Re: Re. feelings VS friendship
20th Jul 2022 3:52am
Thanks, sawyer
Im always the one that listens. most dont ever ask how my life is. selfish fucks. lol
Im always the one that listens. most dont ever ask how my life is. selfish fucks. lol
Re. feelings VS friendship
14th Jul 2022 12:01pm
Sounds heavy
That's an avoid going forward
Print this and hand it over next time ...
BIG LIKE
That's an avoid going forward
Print this and hand it over next time ...
BIG LIKE
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Re: Re. feelings VS friendship
20th Jul 2022 3:54am
I think I may print it and let it exchange hands!
Some of my friends can be, let me say....full of shit and when it comes to your issues, they dont care. Narcissistic assholes, im friends with....fuck me
Some of my friends can be, let me say....full of shit and when it comes to your issues, they dont care. Narcissistic assholes, im friends with....fuck me
Re. feelings VS friendship
23rd Jul 2022 10:52pm
*hugs* Generally I try to focus on the feeling, presence and technique of the writing, as we are always, to some extent, projecting ourselves into what we read and, in life, what we experience. This touched me in a profoundly personal way.
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Re: Re. feelings VS friendship
24th Jul 2022 3:21pm
Thanks, love. As humans, I feel its nice and comforting to know were not alone in how we feel on certain subjects. Hope you are well. <3
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