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I Can See Neptune

Walking along
I can see Neptune ,
shining really strong
above the dusted moon ,
new words of a song
they come rushing through ,
Mars is blushing too
my steps they rush , one , two
on this lush balloon ,
I so miniscule
take a lasting breath ,
of the large see through
atomic molecules ,
what is my effect
and what do I turn to
some energy renewed ,
selectional , directional
complexity , terrestrial
we burn to be from the big sol
then you are me
we're spent then gone
none entity's in spherical
and then there's bi-dimensional
as my mind try's to take it all
my eyes do see
why I am small  .      
Written by diddi (StephenPaul Summerscales)
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