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Lines in the Stories
Are we mere lines in the stories
of selfish gods who happily watch
us sacrifice temporal flesh
to pleasures found between
our birthing cries
and dying breaths?
When all imaginations cease, who will
remember these few lines we shared?
Will they be labeled by the gods as sacred
or sinful?
Let us live our lines fully in
this one and precious life
as our pages burn.
of selfish gods who happily watch
us sacrifice temporal flesh
to pleasures found between
our birthing cries
and dying breaths?
When all imaginations cease, who will
remember these few lines we shared?
Will they be labeled by the gods as sacred
or sinful?
Let us live our lines fully in
this one and precious life
as our pages burn.
Published 10th Jul 2022
Author's Note
Thanks to Bluevelvete for the image of "imaginations ceasing."
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10th Jul 2022 6:00pm
Anonymous
10th Jul 2022 11:24pm
Wow... to be an inspiration is a total dream and aspiration; much thanks, LV.
I'm humbly delighted that I could light a spark ✨
I'm completely in agreement, with your lovely penning. Love and live life as fully as you're able for as long as you're able. Don't waste a moment, if possible!!
Letting our pages burn from our own life's heat!
Marvelous read, dear poet 🙏
Thank you for sharing
🌹 - B
I'm humbly delighted that I could light a spark ✨
I'm completely in agreement, with your lovely penning. Love and live life as fully as you're able for as long as you're able. Don't waste a moment, if possible!!
Letting our pages burn from our own life's heat!
Marvelous read, dear poet 🙏
Thank you for sharing
🌹 - B
14th Jul 2022 11:53am
Thank you for being gracious in your appreciation for my poem. Your writing always inspires!
