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The Hole Story
The Hole Story
From beginning
to end
with fingers
entwined
her voice
undulating
the story
unwind
Each summer
and fall
and vaulted
wet spring,
winter
and sterling
as on
the bells ring
Heaven
and tortured
and lip
bitten trace,
she told
the hole story
while riding
his face.
From beginning
to end
with fingers
entwined
her voice
undulating
the story
unwind
Each summer
and fall
and vaulted
wet spring,
winter
and sterling
as on
the bells ring
Heaven
and tortured
and lip
bitten trace,
she told
the hole story
while riding
his face.
Published 8th Jul 2022
Author's Note
Narratophilia is for real.
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- Edited 8th Jul 2022 1:03am
8th Jul 2022 00:40am
and don't I know it!! ;p
The last stanza here is a narratophiliac's delight....
Loved it , RT
🌹
The last stanza here is a narratophiliac's delight....
Loved it , RT
🌹
8th Jul 2022 00:57am
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8th Jul 2022 5:04am
8th Jul 2022 10:06am
There is a certain intimacy to conversation...it's not small talk or logistics, but personal divulgence that is without defense....that I find disarming and arousing....pillowtalk...that's almost like coffee chatter....
It's cute....in context....
Thanks...
It's cute....in context....
Thanks...
8th Jul 2022 6:05am
8th Jul 2022 10:07am
8th Jul 2022 6:13am
Hoi hoi
Whoah! What a poem!
Don’t worry, I’ll be back to quietly read it again!
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus
Whoah! What a poem!
Don’t worry, I’ll be back to quietly read it again!
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus
8th Jul 2022 10:09am
9th Jul 2022 3:04am
AAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAA! That was fucking awesome.
Great play on words, in words, in words. Really kickass poem, turtle.
Great play on words, in words, in words. Really kickass poem, turtle.
