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What It’s Like
this is probably
what it feels like
to be dead
same as
being alive
but
a little bit off
(like a weird dream or deja vu)
nothing
to be afraid of
so why
am i afraid
(C)2022 Raibeart Bruis
what it feels like
to be dead
same as
being alive
but
a little bit off
(like a weird dream or deja vu)
nothing
to be afraid of
so why
am i afraid
(C)2022 Raibeart Bruis
Published 3rd Jul 2022
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3rd Jul 2022 10:07pm
hi there dearest poet I think there is plenty to be afraid of
but fear without reason is no good all we can do is make our best choices
and hope or pray for the best...
thought provoking write ❤️
but fear without reason is no good all we can do is make our best choices
and hope or pray for the best...
thought provoking write ❤️
3rd Jul 2022 10:41pm
4th Jul 2022 9:32am
Dear KP,
I found I was really thinking hard on this subject. This is the greatest unknown-known thing about human life. We all have an expiration date, and then what? I really appreciated the shift and honesty from speculating what death might be like to what you feel about it. A sentiment that speaks for many. Thoughtful piece, wonderful structure, great flow. H🌷
I found I was really thinking hard on this subject. This is the greatest unknown-known thing about human life. We all have an expiration date, and then what? I really appreciated the shift and honesty from speculating what death might be like to what you feel about it. A sentiment that speaks for many. Thoughtful piece, wonderful structure, great flow. H🌷
Anonymous
- Edited 11th Jul 2022 9:20pm
11th Jul 2022 9:01pm
You're introspection into death is enlightening and also deeply understandable, KP. What a phenomenal poem, here... just hard hitting.
Thinking of you and hoping you're on an upward healing trajectory.
Sending lots of love your way ✨
🌹 - B
x
Thinking of you and hoping you're on an upward healing trajectory.
Sending lots of love your way ✨
🌹 - B
x
