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I promised a throne
Rage.
To long inside this cage,
of discontent.
Hell bent,
on nothing but revenge.
A fire that does not singe,
that warms me from within.
I taste the sin.
It leaves an evil grin,
upon my face.
I fucking hate this place,
of lies.
Now, filled with mistrust.
Killing because I must.
The scent of blood is strong,
as I keep pushing on.
Kneeling, but not to pray.
Instead to lead astray,
those haloed fucks
from the God they trust.
Heavenly tears are cried for
the corpses I have killed.
I just laugh inside because I
have a throne to build.
To long inside this cage,
of discontent.
Hell bent,
on nothing but revenge.
A fire that does not singe,
that warms me from within.
I taste the sin.
It leaves an evil grin,
upon my face.
I fucking hate this place,
of lies.
Now, filled with mistrust.
Killing because I must.
The scent of blood is strong,
as I keep pushing on.
Kneeling, but not to pray.
Instead to lead astray,
those haloed fucks
from the God they trust.
Heavenly tears are cried for
the corpses I have killed.
I just laugh inside because I
have a throne to build.
Published 1st Jul 2022
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1st Jul 2022 8:52pm
2nd Jul 2022 7:23am
I was hesitant to comment on this because it's so scary, but damn, it's scary, and damn, it's good.
Just like I've always admired Johnny Cash for having the guts to write "I shot a man in Reno just to watch him die", I admire your gold mining of your dark side
Just like I've always admired Johnny Cash for having the guts to write "I shot a man in Reno just to watch him die", I admire your gold mining of your dark side
2nd Jul 2022 2:07pm
Absolutely brilliant, your darkness consumes me. Feeds me in sins so egregious that the world bows before the throne you are building and I want to sit there with you watching the world burn. And you see the reflection of the flames in my eyes. And that is simply irresistible, my blood has the scent of night and darkness. And your fangs feel so sharp on my neck but you know I will always want this. A darkness to match yours. An inspiration to do something more evil every time...
**Applause** 👏🏻 👏🏻 👏🏻
There's an enormous freedom in allowing the darkness to grab hold as the warm welcoming and sweet satisfaction of revenge gloriously fills your mouth; fanning the flames of the eternal inferno that needs.... no, must be fed.
This is no fairy-tale, it's power luscious and evil justice. It's the rabid intensity of unmitigated rage and hate fully encompassing, leaving no doubt of the wicked welcomed rewards that come from devouring any and all of those that must be destroyed!! Gorging on sin and faux virtue... bursting into a harbinger of pure hellfire!
and damn, don't i just fucking love watching that delicious unholy explosion!!!
(so stoked you went full evil, my favorite!)
One of your bests, Jay
Ty for sharing.
🖤
B
There's an enormous freedom in allowing the darkness to grab hold as the warm welcoming and sweet satisfaction of revenge gloriously fills your mouth; fanning the flames of the eternal inferno that needs.... no, must be fed.
This is no fairy-tale, it's power luscious and evil justice. It's the rabid intensity of unmitigated rage and hate fully encompassing, leaving no doubt of the wicked welcomed rewards that come from devouring any and all of those that must be destroyed!! Gorging on sin and faux virtue... bursting into a harbinger of pure hellfire!
and damn, don't i just fucking love watching that delicious unholy explosion!!!
(so stoked you went full evil, my favorite!)
One of your bests, Jay
Ty for sharing.
🖤
B
