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I don't write poems (with Reading)
I don't write poetry ...
They spell Me,
They lead me to themselves,
They are my teachers ...
Obediently lying down under my mind,
They carry words from somewhere ...
And I take off like a bird every time,
not afraid to fall. ..
Listening to the azure silence,
I lose myself somewhere in it
And I find in myself
That heaven or hell which lay in my soul,
That gave itself to me
And gave those words -
They are like raindrops
From the heart falling on the leaf.,.
Drawing the world,
Love and hate, darkness and light, me
And they give the heart life again...
I do not write poetry ... They ...
Write me
They spell Me,
They lead me to themselves,
They are my teachers ...
Obediently lying down under my mind,
They carry words from somewhere ...
And I take off like a bird every time,
not afraid to fall. ..
Listening to the azure silence,
I lose myself somewhere in it
And I find in myself
That heaven or hell which lay in my soul,
That gave itself to me
And gave those words -
They are like raindrops
From the heart falling on the leaf.,.
Drawing the world,
Love and hate, darkness and light, me
And they give the heart life again...
I do not write poetry ... They ...
Write me
Author's Note
Inspired by the 'My passion for poetry !' competition.
Still don't think of myself as writing poetry, but it's something that has somehow become important to me and I guess I never expected that having never shared my writing or thinking it was good enough to. I appreciate all the phenomenal writers and wonderful people here and you sharing your thoughts with me and encouraging me. You have made me feel like I contribute something here. This is a very difficult time for me and it means so much to me and I just wanted to say that. Thank you.
I don't plan to enter the competition but maybe I can encourage some others to. There is so much inspiration here... Thanks for sharing your passion with me. X
Still don't think of myself as writing poetry, but it's something that has somehow become important to me and I guess I never expected that having never shared my writing or thinking it was good enough to. I appreciate all the phenomenal writers and wonderful people here and you sharing your thoughts with me and encouraging me. You have made me feel like I contribute something here. This is a very difficult time for me and it means so much to me and I just wanted to say that. Thank you.
I don't plan to enter the competition but maybe I can encourage some others to. There is so much inspiration here... Thanks for sharing your passion with me. X
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Re. I don't write poems (with Reading)
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30th Jun 2022 10:19pm
Thanks for the inspiration with your competition, that was a great idea and something I am sure everyone here can identify with. :) I know I read it a little fast, I still get nervous I guess so I am really glad you felt everything came together and was beautiful. If you hated it I might jump off that cliff. :p (just kidding, maybe, but you know what I mean)
Re. I don't write poems (with Reading)
30th Jun 2022 8:40pm
You get inspired by nature, people and other things and the poem writes you. Keep on writing my beautiful strong smart sexy friend.
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30th Jun 2022 10:53pm
It's amazing how you can find inspiration in just about anything isn't it. And people can inspire us the most so much of the time. Thanks for inspiring me with your encouragement and thoughts.
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30th Jun 2022 11:25pm
You are truly welcome. You have my vote my strong beautiful sexy friend.
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30th Jun 2022 8:44pm
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30th Jun 2022 10:57pm
Short but so sweet. I love being a Passion Flower. ;) They are so beautiful and inspiring; good for anxiety and sleep too, and god knows I need that. lol Thanks for inspiring me with your encouragement and thoughts.
Re. I don't write poems (with Reading)
30th Jun 2022 9:07pm
To some poetry is life, it's eating, breathing, the words offsprings. Hahaha, for in the beginning there was the word. Tight and with the reading, tighter
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30th Jun 2022 10:58pm
So true when you start thinking of how you want to write things instead of taking pictures that's when you are truly lost I guess. lol There is a reason we have so many words. And tight is one of my favorite words, you know what I mean. Get your mind out of the gutter. (just kidding it gives me company :p)
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30th Jun 2022 11:00pm
Hey Keilani, I am so happy you thought it was very beautiful, like you. I really appreciate the well wishes too. Thanks for being so inspiring and the encouragement.
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Anonymous
30th Jun 2022 9:15pm
Your voice "speaks" for others too. The more you write, the better you get (imho). :-)
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30th Jun 2022 11:01pm
I love that you see improvement Ted and I really appreciate you telling me so. Your opinion means a lot to me and I really appreciate all the encouragement you have given me.
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Anonymous
30th Jun 2022 9:31pm
What a stellar ink!!! Absolutely beautiful, lovely poetess🌹
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30th Jun 2022 11:02pm
Hey InDreamz, I am so happy happy you thought it was stellar ink. You are absolutely beautiful and it definitely shows in your writing. Thank you so much for being so inspiring and the encouragement.
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30th Jun 2022 11:05pm
B-E-A utiful! I love that Jay. Thank you for the wonderful compliment and encouragement, I really appreciate it so much. Now about that throne... ;) You know what I am talking about.
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30th Jun 2022 10:28pm
hello lovely Kristina I think that is the truth with a lot of us
if you look at the inspiration that seems to spring from us poets
on any given day we are often on a similar wavelength...
you are brave however and it does take bravery
to write that which make uncomfortable at times
you are a beautiful writer...
💕
I enjoyed the beauty of this ❤️
if you look at the inspiration that seems to spring from us poets
on any given day we are often on a similar wavelength...
you are brave however and it does take bravery
to write that which make uncomfortable at times
you are a beautiful writer...
💕
I enjoyed the beauty of this ❤️
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30th Jun 2022 11:18pm
It's interesting how a community like this can start tapping into the same wavelength so frequently. So often I read your words and I feel I understand and feel them so deeply. And others as well, it's a unique feeling to feel understood sometimes perhaps. I know so many people here have sensitive souls. In many ways I have always felt I communicate differently and I found myself fitting in better outside of America. But knowing that some people get something from what I write and to have that understanding is nice. That you and others think I am a beautiful writer means the world to me. I do have a much more difficult time sharing writing on some subjects but perhaps I will get better at that too. Thank you so much for the inspiration and encouragement.
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30th Jun 2022 11:35pm
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30th Jun 2022 11:47pm
Then I truly adore giving you this gift. Your comment, support, inspiration and encouragement has truly been a beautiful gift for me and I appreciate it so much. You can BBQ this witch anytime. ;)
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1st Jul 2022 00:24am
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1st Jul 2022 00:46am
Hey abetterstart, I really appreciate your comment and encouragement so much. I love that you think I have it done it well. :) I will be sure to stop in and check out your writing soon.
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1st Jul 2022 00:52am
Beautiful piece gorgeous
I'm sorry I didn't catch it sooner
Great write
Love and light
Ron xxc
I'm sorry I didn't catch it sooner
Great write
Love and light
Ron xxc
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1st Jul 2022 1:12am
Thanks Ron, I am so glad you thought it was beautiful. You never need to say sorry to me, you are always a source of so much love and light. You have always been an inspiration and I appreciate all your encouragement so much. Hugs... :)
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1st Jul 2022 00:58am
I often say, my writing doesn't come from me, it comes through me, the page, the screen are mediums of expression we utilize, but in a very real sense, the artist is also a medium, like those oracles of Delphi, speaking cryptic words in the mists rising from fissures of rock. Your audio accompaniment gives a full dimensional presence and emotional vitality to the whole. It is wonderful to experience and resonate with. Thank you for thinking of me, always.
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1st Jul 2022 1:23am
Hey Daniel, it's so good to see you back. I was away for a good part of the year too but you were definitely missed. For some people the best writing is the kind that writes itself straight from the heart and soul. You always have a wonderful depth in how you state things. I absolutely love everything you said here about being the medium, speaking cryptic words (I know something about that lol), and the mists. I am glad you liked the audio. I know it's not my best. I really appreciate all the inspiration and encouragement.
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1st Jul 2022 1:25am
Re. I don't write poems (with Reading)
1st Jul 2022 1:32am
Hi Kristina:)
Everything in this is so true for writers. I felt this down to the fingertips that I use
to grab that pencil. They do write themselves. That spark just starts feeding our pens
with so many words sometimes it gets noisy. Takes talent to really harness it
and place it on paper. We are just the stylist:) And you got great style!!!
Love ya chica:)
Great write!!!
Very proud of ya with this.
Everything in this is so true for writers. I felt this down to the fingertips that I use
to grab that pencil. They do write themselves. That spark just starts feeding our pens
with so many words sometimes it gets noisy. Takes talent to really harness it
and place it on paper. We are just the stylist:) And you got great style!!!
Love ya chica:)
Great write!!!
Very proud of ya with this.
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1st Jul 2022 3:56am
And I thought I was the only one with all these voices in my head telling me to write stuff. lol It's always so awesome to see all the different styles and see where things take us and others. You know I adore your style Chica. (tell you a 'not so' secret: everyone else does too) And the 'Love ya chica:)' just warmed my heart so much I needed to go get some ice. You are that hot. :p
Re. I don't write poems (with Reading)
1st Jul 2022 2:07am
Being possessed by the muse is at the heart of all great poetry...another state of consciousness...very insightful Kristina...great voice...Lawrence
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1st Jul 2022 3:57am
Oh yes! and to be a muse is a serious job filled with creating lots of inspiration. I can think of so many things to inspire. * nevermind, innocent look * I really appreciate the 'great voice' so much BC. I have to trust your opinion as a recording expert. ;) Thanks for inspiring me with your encouragement and thoughts.
Re. I don't write poems (with Reading)
1st Jul 2022 5:05am
This is exactly what you needed to write, and you did. It's perfect for this moment of where you're at with your writing.
I'm nodding my head yes, as I read it.
Bravo, you.
I'm nodding my head yes, as I read it.
Bravo, you.
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1st Jul 2022 1:37pm
Yes, I suppose I did need to write it. :) Thanks Styx, I really appreciate your inspiration and encouragement so much. I am really happy you felt this was aligned with where I am with my writing. Where have you been damnit (just kidding, maybe), you seem to always know the right things to say. :p
Re. I don't write poems (with Reading)
1st Jul 2022 5:08am
such an awesome introspective piece
the beginning and the end really framing this development
I also am the student in this field, learning always
"I do not write poetry, they write me"
a finish of excellence!
the beginning and the end really framing this development
I also am the student in this field, learning always
"I do not write poetry, they write me"
a finish of excellence!
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1st Jul 2022 1:39pm
Sometimes I am way too introspective and that can be torturous when you feel everything and so often over-think things. I love that you understand me so well and found the ending very meaningful. :) And I really appreciate the encouragement and inspiration so much CI. And if we stop learning then what's the point.
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3rd Jul 2022 11:53am
totally agreed,
and its uncanny how we have this understanding of eachother
and its uncanny how we have this understanding of eachother
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Re. I don't write poems (with Reading)
1st Jul 2022 5:33am
Dear K,
Clearly this piece needed birthing. In the poetic sense, of course. 😊
I really appreciated the timeline of your poetic travels between the poem and the authors notes. What I also admire is you putting your voice to your work. There is an added energy and about ten million extra layers of meaning in an oral accounting of someone’s poem that can be overlooked when I’m just reading it on my own. This is a wonderfully powerful and impactful write that has truly hit home for so many of us. Lovely work. H🌷
Clearly this piece needed birthing. In the poetic sense, of course. 😊
I really appreciated the timeline of your poetic travels between the poem and the authors notes. What I also admire is you putting your voice to your work. There is an added energy and about ten million extra layers of meaning in an oral accounting of someone’s poem that can be overlooked when I’m just reading it on my own. This is a wonderfully powerful and impactful write that has truly hit home for so many of us. Lovely work. H🌷
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1st Jul 2022 1:52pm
I suppose those labor pains were starting to get annoying. :p I like how you represented it as a journey between the poem and the author's note. That's what it feels like to me too. You have really been an inspiration and encouraged me and others so much. Remember 'Two Lane Highway'. ;) I love that you felt the reading added something. And I am really glad this one hit home. Your opinion means so much to me. x
Re. I don't write poems (with Reading)
1st Jul 2022 6:24am
Wow what can I say. There couldn't be a more powerful or more passionately written poem than that of you. You are the personification of poetic presence my dear. I couldn't write you , I would set there in awe thinking and thinking and thinking into depths never to reach bottom, failing to put into words and leaving a blank page. My inability to summarize collectively sentences into paragraphs being hung up to be found speechless in thought is probably the highest honor that I can show. Keep on being written and we'll all keep on reading it.
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1st Jul 2022 2:19pm
Wow, such an incredible compliment that you definitely left me speechless. So if that was your goal then well done. ;) Perhaps you already started writing me. ;) This is so inspiring and I really appreciate your encouragement so much. I feel like there is definitely a poem waiting to be written from your words. And I better stop before I start babbling incoherently, for you to honor me with such a depth of words is really so beautiful to me. Thank you.
Re. I don't write poems (with Reading)
1st Jul 2022 7:46am
Perfectly said. That's how I feel when writing. They just spill out. Wonderful poem 😁
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1st Jul 2022 2:13pm
That definitely shows in your writing DC, it flows from the heart and you definitely feel it. I like that you could identify with and understand me so well. Thanks you so much for the inspiration and encouragement. It means a lot to me. :)
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1st Jul 2022 11:50am
Wheeler calls the universe a "self-excited circuit. "
The experience of being is all we need to sense an awareness of inspiration.
We're not hijacking life; life hijacks us.
The experience of being is all we need to sense an awareness of inspiration.
We're not hijacking life; life hijacks us.
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1st Jul 2022 2:12pm
Ah, you always bring so much wisdom and knowledge RT. You move slow enough to take everything in and fast enough to always keep moving forward. ;) Yes, I am imagining a Running Turtle. :p I am a self excited circuit so much of the time, shocking people but they just can't let go. lol Thank you so much for the inspiration and encouragement. I love your insights.
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1st Jul 2022 9:02pm
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1st Jul 2022 9:17pm
That really means a lot to me. I hold you in the utmost respect, you have the passion and pain I understand so well. Thank you for the inspiration and encouragement. Your exploration of styles is beautiful and whatever you do, it will always be brilliant. :)
Re. I don't write poems (with Reading)
1st Jul 2022 9:03pm
Like with any good poet, the poems write themselves... You are appreciated dear poet x
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1st Jul 2022 9:19pm
Thanks you so much Tim, you are awesome and to be appreciated is always a good feeling. You are appreciated too, that's for sure. And yes the poems write themselves, I am not sure it would work any other way for me. I don't try to write, it just happens... x
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1st Jul 2022 9:09pm
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1st Jul 2022 9:20pm
I am really glad you liked hearing it. :) That makes this whole recording thing that scares me so much worthwhile. And that you appreciate the writing is wonderful. Thank you for the encouragement and inspiration. :)
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2nd Jul 2022 6:05pm
Poems come to me when I'm shaving, waiting for a subway and when I'm drinking anything alcoholic. It's amazing that I'm not in AA, I've written a lot of poems on a bunch of sites.
Booze just goes with the human condition.....
Righteous voice Kristina
Booze just goes with the human condition.....
Righteous voice Kristina
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2nd Jul 2022 10:10pm
Poems have a way coming anywhere, anytime don't they. Those are the best ones... (I guess that would be all of them lol) Let's not talk about alcohol. :p Might be too much of that this weekend but I suppose I need it at the moment. Still just hit the gym hard as usual so it's all good. Loving the 'Righteous voice', that makes me feel really good, thanks. ;) Thanks for the encouragement and inspiration.
Re. I don't write poems (with Reading)
3rd Jul 2022 3:31am
Exquisite write which expresses the way many feel! You hit the ball out of the park.
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3rd Jul 2022 1:41pm
Thanks Jazz, I really value your opinion and you taking a moment to share it with me. I absolutely adore that you think I hit the ball out of the park. I am glad people can relate. :) And I really appreciate the encouragement and inspiration so much.
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Poetry is organic. A force of nature. I think these spoken word pieces you do really identify you. I haven't read a ton of you but what I've seen is really impressive...
I'm glad to see you when I do ....
I love the word azure, your choice of words are lush ..
I'm glad to see you when I do ....
I love the word azure, your choice of words are lush ..
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3rd Jul 2022 2:42pm
I adore being lush... ;) Yeah, the word Azure scared me in regards to spoken word but I love it. lol Yes, poetry is such a wonderful way to communicate things that we feel in a way that is not overwhelming and is digestible. I am a force of nature. ;p (that's what they tell me anyway lol) So happy you are impressed, thank you so much for the encouraging words - that means a lot to me.
Re. I don't write poems (with Reading)
3rd Jul 2022 8:05pm
Poetry is what you make of it. And you make a lot of it so don't under estimate yourself. There is a lot of heart and soul here.
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3rd Jul 2022 10:10pm
Hey DD, thanks for stopping by and the wonderful compliment. I really appreciate the encouragement so much. I love that you can see the heart and soul. :) That is definitely where my writing comes from so I really love that you can see it.
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31st Jul 2022 5:02am
Stunning write. Yes, we are a reflection of the words that pour, and in some sense we become them and they become us, a piece of us if you will, where some will try to interpret, but we've been just been written.
Beautiful work.
Beautiful work.
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1st Aug 2022 1:20am
Wow, stunning... That's such an awesome thing to say Wally. Interpreting some things can be quite difficult. It's amazing how some things can affect us psychologically in ways we don't understand. There are things I write about cryptically and I feel okay about posting but then after, it causes me a lot of anxiety and yet I repeat it at some point. Perhaps I am trying to just get over that block sharing things but the reaction is difficult. It's not that these are things I think about all the time or that I want to be seen this way or that way. I worry about the perception and also I have spent so much time just burying or not talking about something but the psychology of it is very complicated. Anyway... I guess I don't want to show my scars, and I don't want to look weak and I don't want to be seen as ... well, you get the point. It's just interesting how much it still affects me I guess. I wish it was cathartic. I want it to be but really it's just stressful and yet I try again anyway. That alone is confusing. Sigh... long response, sorry.
Re. I don't write poems (with Reading)
30th Apr 2024 6:33pm
Another listen..
Faster and direct than your usual readings.
Almost an attitude of some kind.
Think I want to do some readings. Will you teach me?
BIG LIKE AGAIN
Faster and direct than your usual readings.
Almost an attitude of some kind.
Think I want to do some readings. Will you teach me?
BIG LIKE AGAIN
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5th May 2024 6:27pm
This one seemed like it should be more direct. Always some kind of attitude. lol I love that you came back around for another listen. You might break DUP if you do. ;)
Love the BIG LIKE.
Love the BIG LIKE.