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Grief
Oh Lord, the grief if only for a second it was brief
So I could indulge in a sense of relief.
I loved you dearly in life while in death I love you still
You have a place in my heart no one will ever fill.
So I could indulge in a sense of relief.
I loved you dearly in life while in death I love you still
You have a place in my heart no one will ever fill.
Published 27th Jun 2022
| Edited 12th Jul 2022
Author's Note
Inspired by Nan who sadly passed away to years ago and she is missed immensely.
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28th Jun 2022 7:02pm
Hullo and welcome to Deep underground
grief I know a tiny bit about. I hope you find some solace for yourself
I like your rhyme scheme here, it almost lifts the tone a little. might be an idea to have it engraved on a little plaque
given what you've posted thusly far I think you'll settle in here sound enough
*hat tip*
grief I know a tiny bit about. I hope you find some solace for yourself
I like your rhyme scheme here, it almost lifts the tone a little. might be an idea to have it engraved on a little plaque
given what you've posted thusly far I think you'll settle in here sound enough
*hat tip*
