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The deathly hallow
Day by day my lonely heart begins to wallow.
The loss of the future I planned is hard to swallow.
Destined to die, depression is a deathly hallow.
The loss of the future I planned is hard to swallow.
Destined to die, depression is a deathly hallow.
Published 25th Jun 2022
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25th Jun 2022 7:07pm
25th Jun 2022 7:07pm
26th Jun 2022 00:33am
This really says so much with so few words. Sometimes depression comes on quickly but it almost always build over time doesn't it? The future is never quite what we planned and can introduce so many challenges. It certainly can feel like dying, and sometimes you just want to die. Your writing is really great and so relatable Meganne.
26th Jun 2022 3:56am
Dear M,
I’d just be repeating myself if I write how spot on and excellent this piece is. So I’ll just say “YUP”
H🌷
I’d just be repeating myself if I write how spot on and excellent this piece is. So I’ll just say “YUP”
H🌷
