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Broken promises
It fucked me up when they walked out the door.
It knocked me to the floor,
when they broke every promise they swore they would keep.
The loss of them and the future we planned hurts me so deep.
Missing them drains me and makes me feel weak.
How could I miss people who wanted to change me?
Don't feel pitty.
I'm just another sad person in the world that can't sleep.
It knocked me to the floor,
when they broke every promise they swore they would keep.
The loss of them and the future we planned hurts me so deep.
Missing them drains me and makes me feel weak.
How could I miss people who wanted to change me?
Don't feel pitty.
I'm just another sad person in the world that can't sleep.
Published 24th Jun 2022
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24th Jun 2022 6:01am
24th Jun 2022 6:05am
Dear M,
You’re in good company for those of us who go without sleep. This piece aches in places I didn’t think possible. The closing line is stellar but this one “How could I miss people who wanted to change me?” Is the focus for me. Excellent write. H🌷
You’re in good company for those of us who go without sleep. This piece aches in places I didn’t think possible. The closing line is stellar but this one “How could I miss people who wanted to change me?” Is the focus for me. Excellent write. H🌷
24th Jun 2022 7:08am
Awww wow H! You never cease to make me smile with so much pride for my poetry And love for a stranger across oceans with the same love for poetry!! ❤️
