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Another unfinished piece

I feel like I'm fucking up my life
Everything I say, just to get by
I'm okay, I'm alright, I'm just fine
I'm tired of remembering all my fucking lies

Each and every day I'm feeling empty
Just the way you left me
(Just the way you like me)
Feeling horny and a little bit neglected
Talked with all my exes
(You're the only one that gets it)

I don't know how to fix all the wrongs
And it hurts to keep being strong
I've got nothing left to run on
I screamed in silence for so long


I feel like I'm murdering what poetry is with my basic bitch poems.... I need some collab or heavy critique
Written by SickSanityJenn (Esoteric)
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