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Brings Me Down

I woke up with such a positive attitude
the sky was sunny
beautiful scenery all around †
everything seemed perfect †
till you graced me with your disdain
all your hostility brings me down †

heard from a friend †
you were talking crap †
guess you donít have the guts †
to say anything to my face †
so what was it you were saying? †
couldnít be about my work ethic †
itís just too solid †
the love of my life, maybe? †
nah, sheís far more beautiful †
then any girl youíll ever get †

so it had to be about my skin †
you donít think itís superior †
like yours? †
because from where Iím at †
youíre a fucking hobbit †
with what looks like piss allover your mug †
so build a wall around that †
no one wantís to see that shit

Iím a loving soul †
really I am †
but an eye for an eye †
is what I live by †
and some people just irk me †
talking out their assholes
only just ignorance without facts †

forget it †
itís just pointless †
even if it does hurt at times †
I wonít let you know it †
that hateful nonsense is for the birds †
canít argue with stupidity anyway
so I wonít try †
I get more satisfaction †
smiling at your piss face †
watching jealousy eat away †
while Iím holding all the gifts †
that I continuously fight for
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