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The Need
In my innocence we played
In my wantonness, I cried out
Each caress unfolding the want in my eyes
To have you evokes my honied arousal
Voracious, we could not get our fill
My quaking need begets pleas for surrender
Our lust explodes
Trembling sweat begins to cool
Soft whispers, prayers of perfection
Smiling, we drift to dream worlds
In my wantonness, I cried out
Each caress unfolding the want in my eyes
To have you evokes my honied arousal
Voracious, we could not get our fill
My quaking need begets pleas for surrender
Our lust explodes
Trembling sweat begins to cool
Soft whispers, prayers of perfection
Smiling, we drift to dream worlds
Published 19th Jun 2022
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19th Jun 2022 2:38am
19th Jun 2022 5:49am
19th Jun 2022 6:53am
A poem to come together to. Favourite lines (I have written this as one line to show how they read to me as a sentence):
Each caress unfolding the want in my eyes To have you evokes my honied arousal
Each caress unfolding the want in my eyes To have you evokes my honied arousal
19th Jun 2022 8:50am
Hey Mary,
Well you have certainly found your forte
My friend,
Excellent write !
Regards
Sms 🌷
Well you have certainly found your forte
My friend,
Excellent write !
Regards
Sms 🌷
19th Jun 2022 12:20pm
Thank you, Sawyer.
I’ve been struggling with such writers block for about a month now.
I’m slowly starting to feel “normal” again!
I’ve been struggling with such writers block for about a month now.
I’m slowly starting to feel “normal” again!
19th Jun 2022 3:30pm
You're a wonderful writer of eroticism...
I've been struggling with writer's block too so I feel you on that.
This is a beautiful entry
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I've been struggling with writer's block too so I feel you on that.
This is a beautiful entry
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19th Jun 2022 3:32pm
19th Jun 2022 5:39pm
I know that need oh so well and you captured it beautifully. And to lose it is a fate worse than death and to suffer it is a fate we must endure. Loved it!
19th Jun 2022 5:43pm
19th Jun 2022 6:08pm
Thank you, sorry it took me so long to discover you. :) I will definitely be reading more when I can. I admire your work also.
19th Jun 2022 6:10pm
20th Jun 2022 5:36pm
Dear H,
I must admit that you are a woman with fire, flame and passion to be shared and expressed. I may be wrong. But your writings do reflect your sentiments. Love you,
KS
I must admit that you are a woman with fire, flame and passion to be shared and expressed. I may be wrong. But your writings do reflect your sentiments. Love you,
KS
