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Depleted & Defeated
A contortion
Of a
Human
Like a broken
Birth
On a birth
Of
Cold concrete
To be
Walked over
In a
Mission complete
Replete
With two
Legs and two feet
Depleted
&
Defeated
Published 18th Jun 2022
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18th Jun 2022 6:51pm
Hey Cipher
This is an amazing write. I connected with the opening. Just brilliantly stated.
A contortion
Of a
Human
Like a broken
Birth
On a birth
Of
Cold concrete
You got a great connection with these kind of pieces you write.
Like being born into the cold.
This is an amazing write. I connected with the opening. Just brilliantly stated.
A contortion
Of a
Human
Like a broken
Birth
On a birth
Of
Cold concrete
You got a great connection with these kind of pieces you write.
Like being born into the cold.
20th Jun 2022 1:57pm
Thank you A...
That is very kind of you to say...
I rode back to where I saw the
people on the sidewalk, under the blanket...
Where...
I almost rode over them
with no remorse... :p
:)
This time, further down, I saw
a single being, who became the subject of things piece...
I did get some cool camera footage from this area,
that evening...
that I am going to turn into something poetical...
Which is cool...
As I type this I think of that which
such a lifestyle imparts on a person, energetically...
Amongst the hardships ....
Thank you for the thought provoking comment...
That is very kind of you to say...
I rode back to where I saw the
people on the sidewalk, under the blanket...
Where...
I almost rode over them
with no remorse... :p
:)
This time, further down, I saw
a single being, who became the subject of things piece...
I did get some cool camera footage from this area,
that evening...
that I am going to turn into something poetical...
Which is cool...
As I type this I think of that which
such a lifestyle imparts on a person, energetically...
Amongst the hardships ....
Thank you for the thought provoking comment...
