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AS THE SUN GREW
AS THE SUN GREW
The sky settled slowly within the desert dust
as my frustrated companion furiously cussed
Swift auras of cloud cover altered the air
and with such beauty, I no longer care
I was no longer there,
I slid my hand through her hair
The sunset grew behind the great mountain
A fountain found without a sound
SHE AND I KNEW
AS THE SUN GREW
The sky settled slowly within the desert dust
as my frustrated companion furiously cussed
Swift auras of cloud cover altered the air
and with such beauty, I no longer care
I was no longer there,
I slid my hand through her hair
The sunset grew behind the great mountain
A fountain found without a sound
SHE AND I KNEW
AS THE SUN GREW
Published 15th Jun 2022
Author's Note
I'm trying to enter a competi0n
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Anonymous
15th Jun 2022 9:42am
Gripping.... leaving so mucho unsaid... says so much!!
Really enjoyed this one, Archie.
I hope you do enter!
🌹 - 💙
B
Really enjoyed this one, Archie.
I hope you do enter!
🌹 - 💙
B
15th Jun 2022 11:00am
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12th Sep 2022 9:10am
I should have been more motivated by a greater force. Competition is a petty child's game. Write the full true story, no matter what.
17th Sep 2022 11:48am
