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Uncertainty
When your pen
left behind lines
scribing the horizon
I knew
--- I used to
your thoughts
were finding a way
to carry me
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Re. Uncertainty
14th Jun 2022 10:51pm
hello dearest poet I feel sad today
love hurts but it's beautiful in its pain
I don't know...
this is a very feeling write
one that moved me....
love hurts but it's beautiful in its pain
I don't know...
this is a very feeling write
one that moved me....
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Re: Re. Uncertainty
15th Jun 2022 1:13am
Love does hurt, but we couldn't have it without the pain, could we? What's a high without a low? It is a beautiful thing, I agree. I am sorry that you feel sad today, though. I hope the sadness passes soon.
Thank you for taking the time to share and let me know this moved you. The r/l add is very much appreciated as well.
Thank you for taking the time to share and let me know this moved you. The r/l add is very much appreciated as well.
Re. Uncertainty
Anonymous
14th Jun 2022 10:55pm
Words can be the most powerful spiritual beacon in existence, and too few souls either realize such or seek them out. This pointed and punctual work speaks to both scenarios, as I read it. Thank you for sharing this with us to read.

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Re: Re. Uncertainty
15th Jun 2022 1:21am
Words are indeed powerful, particularly when that's all there may be left. They can haunt or comfort, and a myriad of other things. Thank you for seeing that sort of depth in this piece, and feeling it worthy of your reading list.
Re: Re. Uncertainty
15th Jun 2022 1:24am
Thanks for stopping by and letting me know you found it relatable. Much appreciated.
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15th Jun 2022 3:18am
Re. Uncertainty
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Re: Re. Uncertainty
15th Jun 2022 4:53am
Thanks for the compliment and reading list add. Appreciate you taking the time to stop by :-)
Re. Uncertainty
15th Jun 2022 5:41am
Dear PS,
Some poems have fingers that just grab at the heart strings. This was one of them. Reading this through several times netted the same reaction- a catch in my breath. Very touching and lovely piece. H🌷
Some poems have fingers that just grab at the heart strings. This was one of them. Reading this through several times netted the same reaction- a catch in my breath. Very touching and lovely piece. H🌷
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Re: Re. Uncertainty
15th Jun 2022 8:54am
Oh, thank you... that's a very high compliment, and it means a lot to me. Appreciate the reading list add, as well. :-)