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Renunciation of Fear
- Renunciation of Fear -
I tired of the storied saints when they forgot how to dance,
Growing bored with the angels when they lost their romance...
Too many times I have heard people tell me what I should be!
They had no idea what I am, and all that my eyes could see.
I looked into every soul, and saw the hunger they did deny...
As they lost all their creativity, until it made the heavens cry.
With my words and by example I try to show them a new way,
And so many now walk with me, heralding a more lovely day!
Shining like the sun, spirits carried on the darkest of winds,
Bound for a paradise of our own design, from choicest sins.
Hunger not, children of a disharmonious age, newly come...
There is time yet to party, before the darkening of the sun!
Drink from my wisdom and live forever, defying authority,
I bring a new law, to replace the old one's departed dignity.
Do as you will, bringing harm to no one in each endeavor...
Brighter than is silver, your spirit becoming blessed forever!
The road before us is endless and not everyone can chart it,
That is why we have our own, and shall do as we so see fit.
I tired of past traditions when they no longer sang so sweet,
So I created new ones, to lay at all my chosen peoples' feet.
Hear my words and understand, where the past went wrong,
And why, we must liberate ourselves from its' boring song.
Thirst not, children of a disharmonious age, grown weary...
There is time yet to sip, from a chalice of a truer harmony!
You will not perish if you question what your elders teach,
Nor be destroyed if you abandon all your patriarchs preach.
The fruit of old faiths has withered on the vine it lay upon...
Its' time is ending, and with it works of tremendous wrong!
I offer a new fruit, one that fills the whole of the soul entire,
For it excites one's passions and grants heat unto one's fire.
The gods who lied remain distant in their forsaken domains,
Hiding from their misdeeds, from the price of all their pain.
My truth defies their falsehoods, and of it I share the boon,
The age of the sun is fading before the majesty of the moon.
You may exceed the old gods, who kept their truths selfish,
All it takes is liberation and the acknowledgment of a wish.
In my hand is the key, anointed with the blood of this age...
Discovered in the throes of my own sorrow and bitter rage,
When I saw the awful course that humanity was set to walk.
The door to paradise was always there, of which sages talk!
Wicked ones kept it closed, but the path was always clear...
Let us walk that path together, for our destined day is near.
All it takes is but a moment, to renounce the grasp of fear!
I tired of the storied saints when they forgot how to dance,
Growing bored with the angels when they lost their romance...
Too many times I have heard people tell me what I should be!
They had no idea what I am, and all that my eyes could see.
I looked into every soul, and saw the hunger they did deny...
As they lost all their creativity, until it made the heavens cry.
With my words and by example I try to show them a new way,
And so many now walk with me, heralding a more lovely day!
Shining like the sun, spirits carried on the darkest of winds,
Bound for a paradise of our own design, from choicest sins.
Hunger not, children of a disharmonious age, newly come...
There is time yet to party, before the darkening of the sun!
Drink from my wisdom and live forever, defying authority,
I bring a new law, to replace the old one's departed dignity.
Do as you will, bringing harm to no one in each endeavor...
Brighter than is silver, your spirit becoming blessed forever!
The road before us is endless and not everyone can chart it,
That is why we have our own, and shall do as we so see fit.
I tired of past traditions when they no longer sang so sweet,
So I created new ones, to lay at all my chosen peoples' feet.
Hear my words and understand, where the past went wrong,
And why, we must liberate ourselves from its' boring song.
Thirst not, children of a disharmonious age, grown weary...
There is time yet to sip, from a chalice of a truer harmony!
You will not perish if you question what your elders teach,
Nor be destroyed if you abandon all your patriarchs preach.
The fruit of old faiths has withered on the vine it lay upon...
Its' time is ending, and with it works of tremendous wrong!
I offer a new fruit, one that fills the whole of the soul entire,
For it excites one's passions and grants heat unto one's fire.
The gods who lied remain distant in their forsaken domains,
Hiding from their misdeeds, from the price of all their pain.
My truth defies their falsehoods, and of it I share the boon,
The age of the sun is fading before the majesty of the moon.
You may exceed the old gods, who kept their truths selfish,
All it takes is liberation and the acknowledgment of a wish.
In my hand is the key, anointed with the blood of this age...
Discovered in the throes of my own sorrow and bitter rage,
When I saw the awful course that humanity was set to walk.
The door to paradise was always there, of which sages talk!
Wicked ones kept it closed, but the path was always clear...
Let us walk that path together, for our destined day is near.
All it takes is but a moment, to renounce the grasp of fear!
Published 14th Jun 2022
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15th Jun 2022 00:08am
This is all so profound to me! Rings true in my life very deeply. To change everything in this world, all it can take is just that second when people say no to being afraid and the will is strong enough to work the change we want. But to make that it has to be like you said, people have to not be held back by those traditions that are no longer good, and actually were never good and people just could not see that. You are still quite the rebel, my dearest one, and I like that about you! I try to have the same courage, and your words and you inspire me even more. Many kisses, I give you! I hope the night smiles upon your eyes, and makes you smile also.
15th Jun 2022 1:02am
Hello, sweetheart! I find it very pleasing to see that this poem of mine calls to you on so deep a level. From what you have told me previously of your life, especially from the years before we met, I can understand quite well why this poetic work connects to you as personally as it does. You are very astute to notice that part of my message here, about people creating new traditions... ones that serve them better than any older ones that had held them back. From what you have shown me of your particular mystical order, you had to walk a fine line between adhering to tradition and yet charting a new course that is better aligned to your vision for the future. And in the end, certain ways no longer suited, so new ones had to take the place of those. That is how all things evolve, grow, change, and become more than what they were previously. You know me well, beloved, I am indeed still a rebel at heart! When I see that things have become too constrictive in the world, I tend to seek ways to stand out all the more and become the embodiment of all the changes I long to see. Leading by example, as it were. Anyone can, and indeed all it requires is courage. I've taken quite a few leaps of personal faith over the years, and it was never for naught. I am humbled, that my words bring you inspiration! Just as how your beauty has so often inspired my ideals of all that beauty truly is. Kisses beyond counting for you! The night always smiles upon me, for in its' glory I am reminded always of you. :D
15th Jun 2022 00:23am
Such effervescence is this age of light. Such inspiration if step forward is this in which by u....us....we are ah bright. This piece is sympathy to the classics of thy own way. And, spotless is the luv of thyself and it's stable way.
15th Jun 2022 00:48am
It is a delight to see that you have enjoyed this work of mine so very much! It was a joy to read your poetic comment and its' glowing praise. Thank you for taking the time to stop by and write it! :)
15th Jun 2022 1:10am
Ah joyed I am to hear this u have appreciated and u are such the ah welcomed of and from me.
