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This Well of Darkness
Questioning
as one stares
into this well of darkness
ideation deflecting
vibrations and sound
underproof past
yolked in retrospect
viscous thought
what me here brought?
to this place?
to see as now?
memories trapped
in such small volume of space
another chapter of yesteryear
downed with the Rum
all the way down
to return with new tide
after that ocean has run out
as one stares
into this well of darkness
ideation deflecting
vibrations and sound
underproof past
yolked in retrospect
viscous thought
what me here brought?
to this place?
to see as now?
memories trapped
in such small volume of space
another chapter of yesteryear
downed with the Rum
all the way down
to return with new tide
after that ocean has run out
Published 14th Jun 2022
Author's Note
an introspective piece.....
© CanisInc-Untis 2022
© CanisInc-Untis 2022
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Anonymous
- Edited 7th Jul 2022 10:43am
14th Jun 2022 9:43am
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14th Jun 2022 1:59pm
thanks for your thoughtfulness
this is something i dont usually write about
like branched out on a tangent here and tried something layered
but glad you liked it, so i consider it a success
-CIU
this is something i dont usually write about
like branched out on a tangent here and tried something layered
but glad you liked it, so i consider it a success
-CIU
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Jul 2022 10:43am
15th Jun 2022 11:08am
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15th Jun 2022 11:58am
sorry about that
I thought I was replying correctly
hopefully you got this one quicker
just let me know if it got delayed again
-CIU
I thought I was replying correctly
hopefully you got this one quicker
just let me know if it got delayed again
-CIU
Anonymous
- Edited 29th May 2023 7:45am
14th Jun 2022 10:45am
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14th Jun 2022 2:01pm
