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Thirsty

 
I crave you like carbonation
that bubbly fizz
on my tongue
burns sliding down
my throat
colder the better
just touching the edge
of brain freeze
sometimes plunging over

Can't explain why
it's so satisfying
or why I ache for that
particular pain

but I want it
every day

Written by paperstains
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Author's Note
Just a bit of fun, because my brain needed it.

My favorite is a super cold ginger beer. Different kinds of burn with that. Yum!
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