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Mental Health
Tarnished
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Tarnished
Dust me off after
you have left me on your pedestal
long enough to have your memories
tarnished
Written by
Her
Published
11th Jun 2022
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Author's Note
Reconnected with someone after many years and he found me a much different woman after having had a breakdown. We were both the most significant relationships of each other’s lives.
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#breakup
#memories
#MentalHealth
#regret
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LilDragonFly
11th Jun 2022 8:48pm
This is exquisite... crisp... poignant brevity...
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Her
11th Jun 2022 8:50pm
Thank you dear poetess for your comment. I truly appreciate your critiques.
Enjoy your day
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PoetSpeak
11th Jun 2022 9:08pm
I've always wondered what those meetings would feel like ...
Significant write
BIG LIKE
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Her
11th Jun 2022 9:09pm
Difficult does not describe.
Thank you
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averageJoe69
(Ron Summers)
11th Jun 2022 9:37pm
Clever write sweetie, heartfelt and on point
Love and light
Ron x
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Her
12th Jun 2022 4:21am
Thank you, friend. As always. Your support is always welcomed and appreciated.
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Adelphina
12th Jun 2022 00:36am
What a great title.
For such a small poem it is
a juggernaut of truth.
Hang in there:)
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Her
12th Jun 2022 4:22am
Thank you poetess for stopping by. I appreciate the critique and encouragement. Have a good evening.
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